Editing Estrus Nazzal

*Name: Estrus Nazzal
*Career: Scum
*Career Rank: 1
*Homeworld: Volg Hive (Fenksworld - Hive World)
*Background Package: Brotherhood of Thollos
*Divination:"A Suspicious Mind is a Healthy Mind"
*Height:1.86m
*Weight:65kg
*Eyes:Grey
*Hair:Black
*Skin:Tan
*Age:33
=Stats=

*Weapon Skill: 35
*Ballistic Skill: 30
*Strength: 27
*Toughness: 37
*Agility: 40*
*Intelligence: 29
*Perception: 36
*Willpower: 31 
*Fellowship: 19
*Wounds: 13/13
*Fate Points: 1 
*Insanity Points:7 
*XP Total: 400 (0 unspent)

=Skills=
*Common Lore (Imperium)(Int)
*Speak Language (Low Gothic, Volg Hive Dialect) (Int)
*Intimidate (S)
*Awareness (Per)
*Blather (Int)
*Charm (Fel)
*Deceive (Fel)

=Talents=
*Pistol Weapon Training (SP)
*Basic Weapon Training (SP)
*Melee Weapon Training (Primitive)
*Peer (Underworld)
*Streetfighting
*Ambidextrous
*Jaded
*Light Sleeper
*Sound Constitution (x2)

=Gear=
*Monoknife
*Brass knuckles
*Heavy Leathers [AP:2 (Primitive) Body, Arms, Legs]

=Traits=
*Accustomed to Crowds
*Caves of Steel
*Hivebound
*Born Survivor
*Grim

=XP=
==Rank 1==
*Brotherhood of Thollos Starting Package (200xp)
*Agility (Simple) (100xp)
*Sound Constitution (100xp)

=Background=
Growing up in one of the most brutal and ruthless planets in the Calixis Sector makes those that survive to adulthood on Fenksworld hard.  Estrus Nazzal is no exception.  Most of his life was spent on the streets of the Volg Hive running with the gangers, running from and/or ambushing Enforcers, providing muscle to narco-traffikers, and breaking arms of Hivers that didn't show the Shadowblades the proper "respect" and/or pay their "protection" Gelts.  After his entire gang was wiped out by an Adeptus Arbites raid and he was the sole-survivor (being the only one out on a timely errand), he found his way to the local chapter of the Brotherhood of Thollos.  A few of the members were aware of his cunning and criminal prowess and after an induction mission where he proved his loyalty he was made a full member.  It was a few more years until Estrus made it off Fenksworld (A frequent desire of those who live there), to the Imperial World Bilani where he and a few other members were put to ground to liase with the local Underworld population and await further instructions. 

This world is a Paradise Planet in his eyes filled with sheep and plunder.  He is amazed every day when he wakes up without having to trap his doors and windows that no one has cut his throat in his sleep.  The Brotherhood didn't send them off with much in the way of Thrones so he still has to work but anything is better than being in the Volg Hive.  Except maybe being on Dusk, from what he's heard.
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	Growing up in one of the most brutal and ruthless planets in the Calixis Sector makes those that survive to adulthood on Fenksworld hard. Estrus Nazzal is no exception. Most of his life was spent on the streets of the Volg Hive running with the gangers, running from and/or ambushing Enforcers, providing muscle to narco-traffikers, and breaking arms of Hivers that didn't show the Shadowblades the proper "respect" and/or pay their "protection" Gelts. After his entire gang was wiped out by an Adeptus Arbites raid and he was the sole-survivor (being the only one out on a timely errand), he found his way to the local chapter of the Brotherhood of Thollos. A few of the members were aware of his cunning and criminal prowess and after an induction mission where he proved his loyalty he was made a full member. It was a few more years until Estrus made it off Fenksworld (A frequent desire of those who live there), to the Imperial World Bilani where he and a few other members were put to ground to liase with the local Underworld population and await further instructions.		Growing up in one of the most brutal and ruthless planets in the Calixis Sector makes those that survive to adulthood on Fenksworld hard. Estrus Nazzal is no exception. Most of his life was spent on the streets of the Volg Hive running with the gangers, running from and/or ambushing Enforcers, providing muscle to narco-traffikers, and breaking arms of Hivers that didn't show the Shadowblades the proper "respect" and/or pay their "protection" Gelts. After his entire gang was wiped out by an Adeptus Arbites raid and he was the sole-survivor (being the only one out on a timely errand), he found his way to the local chapter of the Brotherhood of Thollos. A few of the members were aware of his cunning and criminal prowess and after an induction mission where he proved his loyalty he was made a full member. It was a few more years until Estrus made it off Fenksworld (A frequent desire of those who live there), to the Imperial World Bilani where he and a few other members were put to ground to liase with the local Underworld population and await further instructions.

−	This world is a Paradise Planet in his eyes filled with sheep and plunder. He is amazed every day ~~that~~ he ~~doesn't have~~ to trap his doors and windows that no one has cut his throat in his sleep. ~~He's amazed that clean drinking water is everywhere and free. However,~~ The Brotherhood didn't send them off with much in the way of Thrones so he still has to work but anything is better than being in the Volg Hive. Except maybe being on Dusk, from what he's heard.	+	This world is a Paradise Planet in his eyes filled with sheep and plunder. He is amazed every day when he wakes up without having to trap his doors and windows that no one has cut his throat in his sleep. The Brotherhood didn't send them off with much in the way of Thrones so he still has to work but anything is better than being in the Volg Hive. Except maybe being on Dusk, from what he's heard.