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[[Image:fenghuang.jpg|thumb|350px]]An ebon horse picked its way along a narrow path worn into the hills, as it had done for a day and a half.  Tall and proud, the creature's eyes glinted with intelligence and dark fire, and its ivory tack had worn smooth with seeming centuries of use.  Mangy gravehounds nipped at the horse's fetlocks, barking out the dying thoughts of the last brain their tongues had tasted, until a glance from the horse's rider sent them running in terror.  That rider, the [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]], looked scornfully at the hounds as they ran; they never should have come so close, but he came to the temple as a supplicant, begging for help, and begging demanded humility.  There was only the Prince himself and his mount, Dance of Ruin, and the road to Fenghuang Temple.
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[[Image:fenghuang.jpg|thumb|350px]]An ebon horse picked its way along a narrow path worn into the hills, as it had done for a day and a half.  Tall and proud, the creature's eyes glinted with intelligence and dark fire, and its ivory tack had worn smooth with seeming centuries of use.  Mangy gravehounds nipped at the horse's fetlocks, barking out the dying thoughts of the last brain their tounges had tasted, until a glance from the horse's rider sent them running in terror.  That rider, the [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]], looked scornfully at the hounds as they ran; they never should have come so close, but he came to the temple as a supplicant, begging for help, and begging demanded humility.  There was only the Prince himself and his mount, Dance of Ruin, and the road to Fenghuang Temple.
  
Minutes later, Dance of Ruin topped the last rise and the temple stood revealed.  It was a beautiful sight, had the Prince Resplendent eyes for beauty.  The main hall, capped with jade tiling and carvings of twin birds, stood with doors open to receive visitors.  Flanking it on either side were twin corridors, each leading to a hall for one of the Abbot's two sangha.  A fiery red lacquer coated the outside walls and supporting pillars, and covering the whole outside were small reliefs of celestial lions and the fire spirits of Heaven.  A natural sulphur-spring bubbled up from the earth in front of the temple, feeding the plants, and the foul smell was the one thing in range of his senses the Prince Resplendent could tolerate; everything else was redolent of life, and it prickled down the Prince Resplendant's spine.
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Minutes later, Dance of Ruin topped the last rise and the temple stood revealed.  It was a beautiful sight, had the Prince Resplendent eyes for beauty.  The main hall, capped with jade tiling and carvings of twin birds, stood with doors open to receive visitors.  Flanking it on either side were twin corridors, each leading to a hall for one of the Abbot's two sangha.  A fiery red lacquer coated the outside walls and supporting pillars, and covering the whole outside were small reliefs of celestial lions and the fire spirits of Heaven.  A natural sulphur-spring bubbled up from the earth in front of the temple, feeding the plants, and the foul smell was the one thing in range of his senses the Prince Resplendent could tolerate; everything else was redolent of life, and it prickled down the Prince Resplendent's spine.
  
 
The Prince Resplendent prodded his horse forward with ebon spurs; the [[Abbot of Hunger and Dust]] would be waiting to hear his petition.
 
The Prince Resplendent prodded his horse forward with ebon spurs; the [[Abbot of Hunger and Dust]] would be waiting to hear his petition.

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