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==Background/Bio==
 
==Background/Bio==
She ran. Rebecca Quinn, nothing more than a skinny slight bit of blue-eyed girl, a child just barely touching her thirteenth birthday, ran as though the devil himself were after him, her blonde hair flying like a flag behind her.
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She ran. Rebecca Quinn, nothing more than a skinny slight bit of brown-eyed girl, a child just barely touching her thirteenth birthday, ran as though the devil himself were after him, her blonde hair flying like a flag behind her.
  
 
And perhaps...perhaps that devil was behind her, steaming fire and brimstone, as the Alliance troops stormed groundward, shooting, slaughtering, killing as they went, following a scorched-earth policy in the attempt to end the war with as much finality as could be had. It was War, it had come finally come her home, to the smoldering remains of her family's front door.
 
And perhaps...perhaps that devil was behind her, steaming fire and brimstone, as the Alliance troops stormed groundward, shooting, slaughtering, killing as they went, following a scorched-earth policy in the attempt to end the war with as much finality as could be had. It was War, it had come finally come her home, to the smoldering remains of her family's front door.

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