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<blockquote>"You are a liar!" Jamil shouted, his face turning beet red with anger, "you gave Bushra your word and then went ahead and stole her ''ird''!"</blockquote>
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"You are a liar!" Jamil shouted, his face turning beet red with anger, "you gave Bushra your word and then went ahead and stole her ''ird''!"
  
<blockquote>"And you are blowing smoke," Saif replied calmly, inspecting his manicured nails. "The little flamer is the one who abandoned me."</blockquote>
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"And you are blowing smoke," Saif replied calmly, inspecting his manicured nails. "The little flamer is the one who abandoned me."
  
<blockquote>"Gentlemen," the ''Mubesha'' interrupted quietly, raising one scarred hand in a calming gesture, "You will control your tempers in my ''bayt''. We Hadar are honorable, regardless of family; there will be no Burnout displays here."</blockquote>
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"Gentlemen," the ''Mubesha'' interrupted quietly, raising one scarred hand in a calming gesture, "You will control your tempers in my ''bayt''. We Hadar are honorable, regardless of family; there will be no Burnout displays here."
  
<blockquote>"Saif is my ''khamsa'', and you are no cousin of mine, Jamil Abdukrahman," the elderly ''Mubesha'' continued calmly, apparently indifferent to the hot glares being shot the young man's way from around the room. "You are here under the protection of my ''diyafa'', but considering the enmity between our two ''goum'', no one here questions your ''sharaf hamasa''." The ''Mubesha'' leaned forward slightly and continued in an, if possible, calmer tone. "But these are serious insults and grave accusations you make against a member of the Rizwaan tribe."</blockquote>
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"Saif is my ''khamsa'', and you are no cousin of mine, Jamil Abdukrahman," the elderly ''Mubesha'' continued calmly, apparently indifferent to the hot glares being shot the young man's way from around the room. "You are here under the protection of my ''diyafa'', but considering the enmity between our two ''goum'', no one here questions your ''sharaf hamasa''." The ''Mubesha'' leaned forward slightly and continued in an, if possible, calmer tone. "But these are serious insults and grave accusations you make against a member of the Rizwaan tribe."
  
<blockquote>"I beg forgiveness ''Mubesha''," Jamil replied more calmly with a slight bow that allowed his rune tattoos to peek over the collar of his shirt, "but the insults made against my ''goum'' are equally grave. As you know, a woman's ''ird'' is not her virginity, but a matter of her word of honor, a measure of her trustworthiness." The ''Mubesha'' nodded gravely, motioning again for him to continue.</blockquote>
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"I beg forgiveness ''Mubesha''," Jamil replied more calmly with a slight bow that allowed his rune tattoos to peek over the collar of his shirt, "but the insults made against my ''goum'' are equally grave. As you know, a woman's ''ird'' is not her virginity, but a matter of her word of honor, a measure of her trustworthiness." The ''Mubesha'' nodded gravely, motioning again for him to continue.
  
<blockquote>"I am here to formally accuse Saif Waseemah, ''khamsa'' to the Rizwaan ''goum'' of taking the ''ird'' of my sister, Bushra Abdukrahman, given in good faith, and then falsely accusing her of unfaithfulness." An angry murmur swirled around the smoky room.</blockquote>
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"I am here to formally accuse Saif Waseemah, ''khamsa'' to the Rizwaan ''goum'' of taking the ''ird'' of my sister, Bushra Abdukrahman, given in good faith, and then falsely accusing her of unfaithfulness." An angry murmur swirled around the smoky room.
  
<blockquote>The ''Mubesha'' remained silent for nearly a minute and then spoke. "We are the Hadar; we are ''ibn amm''. Our ways are simple: 'I against my brothers, I and my brothers against my cousins, I and my brothers and my cousins against the world.' " The observers scattered around the room nodded, Jamil with them. This was the very basis of Hadar life. "What separates us from the world is our honor. It is what makes us Hadar and not just petty thieves. Although it angers me to pay even the slightest attention to these rumors from an enemy about my cousin, ''ird'' is a matter of honor. If the accusations are true, then Saif has acted dishonorably, and can no longer claim the honorable protection of my ''diyafa''." Saif stirred silently in his chair, suddenly not so sure of the outcome. "Since there is no evidence to support either side, simply each one's word, I declare ''bisha'a''."</blockquote>
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The ''Mubesha'' remained silent for nearly a minute and then spoke. "We are the Hadar; we are ''ibn amm''. Our ways are simple: 'I against my brothers, I and my brothers against my cousins, I and my brothers and my cousins against the world.' " The observers scattered around the room nodded, Jamil with them. This was the very basis of Hadar life. "What separates us from the world is our honor. It is what makes us Hadar and not just petty thieves. Although it angers me to pay even the slightest attention to these rumors from an enemy about my cousin, ''ird'' is a matter of honor. If the accusations are true, then Saif has acted dishonorably, and can no longer claim the honorable protection of my ''diyafa''." Saif stirred silently in his chair, suddenly not so sure of the outcome. "Since there is no evidence to support either side, simply each one's word, I declare ''bisha'a''."
  
<blockquote>The room broke into sudden commotion at the ''Mubesha'''s decision. ''Bisha'a'', or the Ordeal by Fire, was the traditional Hadar method for detecting liars. A large iron ladle, called a ''tassa bil basha'', was heated in coals and both claimants were asked to lick the ladle three times. The ''Mubesha'' counted a short pause on the ritual ''kombolói'' beads, and then inspected both party's tongues. Tradition held that a liar's mouth went dry, so whichever person's tongue was most badly burned was considered the liar.</blockquote>
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The room broke into sudden commotion at the ''Mubesha'''s decision. ''Bisha'a'', or the Ordeal by Fire, was the traditional Hadar method for detecting liars. A large iron ladle, called a ''tassa bil basha'', was heated in coals and both claimants were asked to lick the ladle three times. The ''Mubesha'' counted a short pause on the ritual ''kombolói'' beads, and then inspected both party's tongues. Tradition held that a liar's mouth went dry, so whichever person's tongue was most badly burned was considered the liar.
  
<blockquote>"I accept the wise decision of the ''Mubesha''," Jamil declared after only a short pause, confidentially staring across the room Saif.</blockquote>
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"I accept the wise decision of the ''Mubesha''," Jamil declared after only a short pause, confidentially staring across the room Saif.
  
<blockquote>"I-I-I-I r-r-refuse," stammered a suddenly badly sweating Saif, unable to meet Jamil's eyes, "I-I-I will ac-ac-accept whatever p-p-punishment the ''Mubesha'' d-d-decrees." Traditionally, ''bisha'a'' was voluntary, but if one side refused he was automatically considered guilty.</blockquote>
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"I-I-I-I r-r-refuse," stammered a suddenly badly sweating Saif, unable to meet Jamil's eyes, "I-I-I will ac-ac-accept whatever p-p-punishment the ''Mubesha'' d-d-decrees." Traditionally, ''bisha'a'' was voluntary, but if one side refused he was automatically considered guilty.
  
<blockquote>"Very well," the ''Mubesha'' murmured. "Jamil Abdukrahman, I formally declare Saif Waseemah a liar and further declare your sister Bushra's ''ird'' to be intact. She is to be considered honorable by all Hadar unless she proves herself not so at a later time. However, we will punish Saif as a private family matter; there will be no attempts to punish him from your tribe. Is this acceptable to you?" Jamil paused, obviously torn between two emotions.</blockquote>
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"Very well," the ''Mubesha'' murmured. "Jamil Abdukrahman, I formally declare Saif Waseemah a liar and further declare your sister Bushra's ''ird'' to be intact. She is to be considered honorable by all Hadar unless she proves herself not so at a later time. However, we will punish Saif as a private family matter; there will be no attempts to punish him from your tribe. Is this acceptable to you?" Jamil paused, obviously torn between two emotions.
  
<blockquote>"I will accept your ruling, wise ''Mubesha''," he replied with a sigh. "I suspect my ''goum'' would feel the same, and my ''Mubesha'' would probably make the same decision. For myself, I will not seek further revenge against Saif, but if word gets back to my ''khamsa'' he was punished lightly, I can not be held accountable for their actions." The ''Mubesha'' nodded. "Then with that I will impose on your ''diyafa'' no longer. You have been a gracious host, Sanura Rizwaan."</blockquote>
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"I will accept your ruling, wise ''Mubesha''," he replied with a sigh. "I suspect my ''goum'' would feel the same, and my ''Mubesha'' would probably make the same decision. For myself, I will not seek further revenge against Saif, but if word gets back to my ''khamsa'' he was punished lightly, I can not be held accountable for their actions." The ''Mubesha'' nodded. "Then with that I will impose on your ''diyafa'' no longer. You have been a gracious host, Sanura Rizwaan."
  
<blockquote>The elderly woman in expensive business robes watched impassively as the young man walked out of her "tent," just the back room of a high-class restaurant really, but tradition had to be maintained. ''If only my children were more like that brave young man'', she thought sadly, ''this unending turf war might be over by now. Well, I suppose it's never too late to start.'' She turned her attention back to her sister's rather pale excuse for a son.</blockquote>
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The elderly woman in expensive business robes watched impassively as the young man walked out of her "tent," just the back room of a high-class restaurant really, but tradition had to be maintained. ''If only my children were more like that brave young man'', she thought sadly, ''this unending turf war might be over by now. Well, I suppose it's never too late to start.'' She turned her attention back to her sister's rather pale excuse for a son.
  
<blockquote>"Saif Waseemah," she started, as emotionless as a Church Templar, "you have intentionally attempted to dishonor another Hadar, and by doing so," ''and getting caught, you twit'' "lost your own ''sharaf''." Her voice rose toward boiling. "To make matters worse, now all the ''ibn amm'' will know that a member of the Rizwaan ''goum'' was without honor." Her voice burned as hot as one of the Guild's furnaces. "And finally, you tried to take away a young girl's ''ird'', why, because she wouldn't go down on you?!? Hadar women own all property in our society, but only if their word of honor is unquestioned! If a woman is unfaithful in bed, how can her ''goum'' trust her with their wealth?" she spat at him. "I am only ''Mubesha'' today because your ''ird''-less mother conceived you while she claimed to be faithful to another. I can see we have a unique opportunity to prevent your line's ''dum'' from infecting our tribe any longer. Who knows, perhaps its lack will even keep you out of trouble."</blockquote>
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"Saif Waseemah," she started, as emotionless as a Church Templar, "you have intentionally attempted to dishonor another Hadar, and by doing so," ''and getting caught, you twit'' "lost your own ''sharaf''." Her voice rose toward boiling. "To make matters worse, now all the ''ibn amm'' will know that a member of the Rizwaan ''goum'' was without honor." Her voice burned as hot as one of the Guild's furnaces. "And finally, you tried to take away a young girl's ''ird'', why, because she wouldn't go down on you?!? Hadar women own all property in our society, but only if their word of honor is unquestioned! If a woman is unfaithful in bed, how can her ''goum'' trust her with their wealth?" she spat at him. "I am only ''Mubesha'' today because your ''ird''-less mother conceived you while she claimed to be faithful to another. I can see we have a unique opportunity to prevent your line's ''dum'' from infecting our tribe any longer. Who knows, perhaps its lack will even keep you out of trouble."
  
<blockquote>She beckoned to her tattooed ''Hadarram'' sons with a badly scarred hand as Saif's eyes went wide with understanding. "Emascualte him."  ''--originally written by Daneel--''</blockquote>
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She beckoned to her tattooed ''Hadarram'' sons with a badly scarred hand as Saif's eyes went wide with understanding. "Emascualte him."  ''--originally written by Daneel--''
  
 
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