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"Rivers' was right, of course - it's a manse.  Or rather a demesne; the manse that capped it is long broken.  I knew as soon as we reached the inmost ring of willows; they come close enough to the shore to dip their branches into the water, and we hid in their shadows as I worked the geomantic ritual Rivers showed us.  The area's filled with water essence, which I expected from the lake - the water is still and pure and floats oversized lotus blossoms on the surface - but layered over that is the strong sense of lunar essence as well.  We couldn't decide what to make of it without a more thorough survey, and the creatures kept us from that.
 
"Rivers' was right, of course - it's a manse.  Or rather a demesne; the manse that capped it is long broken.  I knew as soon as we reached the inmost ring of willows; they come close enough to the shore to dip their branches into the water, and we hid in their shadows as I worked the geomantic ritual Rivers showed us.  The area's filled with water essence, which I expected from the lake - the water is still and pure and floats oversized lotus blossoms on the surface - but layered over that is the strong sense of lunar essence as well.  We couldn't decide what to make of it without a more thorough survey, and the creatures kept us from that.
  
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"They were animals, mostly, mutated things; cranes with carp scales, water bugs made giant, koi with predatory fangs...  But there were the spirits, too.  Heketa, brine curs, sobeksis; no fewer than five of each.  Each group had claimed one of the flying bridges as their own territory; there were five, of willow wood inlaid with silver and pearl, spanning from the shore to a central island.  Or at least they used to; three of the five have lost their arches into the lake and a fourth looks like it would collapse if any weight set on it.  I wouldn't call what they did war, but more a sullen stalemate.  A rainfall would set them to skirmishing again.
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"They were animals, mostly, mutated things; cranes with carp scales, water bugs made giant, koi with predatory fangs...  But there were the spirits, too.  Heketa, brine curs, sobeksis; no fewer than five of each.  Each group had claimed one of the flying bridges as their own territory; there were five, of willow wood inlaid with silver and pearl, spanning from the shore to a central island.  Or at least they used to; three of the five have lost their arches into the lake and a fourth looks like it would collapse if any weight set on it.  I wouldn't call what they did war, but more a carefully studied stalemate.  A rainfall would set them to skirmishing again.
  
 
"Because of the elementals, we didn't want to risk crossing the last bridge to the center, but we saw a wide, terraced pavilion on the island before we left.  It had two low stories with open walls, and Hatsu Shi swears that he saw divans inside; Nama Bi says it was just rubble from the roof.  We couldn't get close enough to be sure, but I think the whole lake was once a carefully designed pleasure garden."
 
"Because of the elementals, we didn't want to risk crossing the last bridge to the center, but we saw a wide, terraced pavilion on the island before we left.  It had two low stories with open walls, and Hatsu Shi swears that he saw divans inside; Nama Bi says it was just rubble from the roof.  We couldn't get close enough to be sure, but I think the whole lake was once a carefully designed pleasure garden."

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