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| − | Jaela happily skips along in her garden | + | Jaela happily skips along in her garden picking flowers |
A shadow of an airship then takes over the garden | A shadow of an airship then takes over the garden | ||
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Smoke emerges behind her and theatrically V steps out as he looms over her to swoop her up in his cape | Smoke emerges behind her and theatrically V steps out as he looms over her to swoop her up in his cape | ||
| − | Jaela looks up | + | Jaela looks up |
Captain Jarlot, Paladin Lisa, and Doog grab V and start beating him up | Captain Jarlot, Paladin Lisa, and Doog grab V and start beating him up | ||
| − | '''Captain Jarlot''': When I say no kidnapping the Pontiff! I mean no kidnapping the Pontiff. Hold him down while I beat him up for | + | '''Captain Jarlot''': When I say no kidnapping the Pontiff! I mean no kidnapping the Pontiff. Hold him down while I beat him up for rules violations. |
'''Doog''': Yes sir. | '''Doog''': Yes sir. | ||
| − | '''Marish''': MANNnnnnn | + | '''Marish''': MANNnnnnn can't we go back to Sharn! I'm almost out of fur curlers and...feminine supplies. Plus Cat litter! |
'''Captain Jarlot''': I am punishing deviant crew! | '''Captain Jarlot''': I am punishing deviant crew! | ||
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'''Marish''': They're all deviant crew. | '''Marish''': They're all deviant crew. | ||
| − | '''Andrea''': I told you, if you'd just | + | '''Andrea''': I told you, if you'd just me kill them all and reanimate them then we wouldn't have these discipline problems! |
| − | '''Captain Jarlot''': Don't tempt me... 29 punches! THIRTY! | + | '''Captain Jarlot''': Don't tempt me....29 punches! THIRTY! |
'''Ketler''': Hey Jaela, want some candy? | '''Ketler''': Hey Jaela, want some candy? | ||
| − | '''Captain Jarlot''': You're next | + | '''Captain Jarlot''': You're next Nancy Boy! |
'''Jam''': The Dragon Below commands you not to abuse your fellow crew members! | '''Jam''': The Dragon Below commands you not to abuse your fellow crew members! | ||
| − | '''V''': Come with me! Join my revolution to conquer all of the world in the name of democracy and overthrowing the proletariat | + | '''V''': Come with me! Join my revolution to conquer all of the world in the name of democracy and overthrowing the proletariat Jaela! You're uncorrupted! |
| − | V is dragged back onboard the ship before it zooms off | + | V is dragged back onboard the ship before it zooms off |
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Cardinal Kronzen walks into the garden after they left | Cardinal Kronzen walks into the garden after they left | ||
| − | '''Cardinal Kronzen''': Anything of interest today | + | '''Cardinal Kronzen''': Anything of interest today your Holiness? |
| − | The young girl watches the now familiar ship sail off into the distance | + | The young girl watches the now familiar ship sail off into the distance |
| − | '''Jaela''': Same old... Same old. | + | '''Jaela''': Same old...Same old. |
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