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''"UNFREEZE as the camera slides over to the guy still seated right'' | ''"UNFREEZE as the camera slides over to the guy still seated right'' | ||
''across her over the low table. He is lanky and kind-of handsome, even'' | ''across her over the low table. He is lanky and kind-of handsome, even'' | ||
| β | ''with the three scars | + | ''with the three scars taht run horizontally over his face. He is also a'' |
| β | ''little | + | ''little unshaves on the sides, with spiky hair brushed back from his'' |
''face. He grins widely, showing a wide row of teeth. He is dressed in a'' | ''face. He grins widely, showing a wide row of teeth. He is dressed in a'' | ||
''suit, sort of - the tie is undone and hanging over his shoulder, the'' | ''suit, sort of - the tie is undone and hanging over his shoulder, the'' | ||
