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"Are you okay, sister? You are suddenly pale." His eyes grew wide. "Wait...you love him." It was not a question.
 
"Are you okay, sister? You are suddenly pale." His eyes grew wide. "Wait...you love him." It was not a question.
  
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They rode on in silence. After a long time, Ji-min spoke. "Our arrangement was simple. I would be his architect. He has grand plans that excite me. I saw in him a need for a woman, and one day mentioned his lack of a wife. We talked, but I could not find the right words to include you in the conversation. Our lord saw that. Later he told me that he had been trying to find a place for you; your skills had impressed him."
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They rode on in silence. After a long time, Ji-min spoke. "Our arrangement was simple. I would be his architect. He has grand plans that excite me. I saw in him a need for a woman, and one day mentioned his lack of a wife. We talked, but I could not find the right words to include you in the conversation. Our lord saw that. Later he tole me that he had been trying to find a place for you; your skills had impressed him."
  
 
"Later?" Ji-hun asked. "How much later?"
 
"Later?" Ji-hun asked. "How much later?"

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