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The men, seemingly hearing his approach turned to face him and the bag dropped awkwardly between them. As it did, an arm slipped out of the loosely zipped bag. Val's eyes had always been good and his time on the floor had only honed his attention to detail. So he almost immediately recognized the elaborate tiger tattoo on the wrist of the arm. The last time he had seen it, the man who it belonged to had been yelling for an audience with Mr. Jann.  
 
The men, seemingly hearing his approach turned to face him and the bag dropped awkwardly between them. As it did, an arm slipped out of the loosely zipped bag. Val's eyes had always been good and his time on the floor had only honed his attention to detail. So he almost immediately recognized the elaborate tiger tattoo on the wrist of the arm. The last time he had seen it, the man who it belonged to had been yelling for an audience with Mr. Jann.  
  
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The men, who Valentine now recognized as part of Mr. Jaan's personal security detail, looked Val up and down briefly. "We weren't here and neither were you. Isn't that right, Mr. Quick?"
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The men, who Valentine now recognized as part of Mr. Wei's personal security detail, looked Val up and down briefly. "We weren't here and neither were you. Isn't that right, Mr. Quick?"
  
 
Val nodded. He pointed towards the arm dangling out of the bag. "Before we both vanish, you might want to get your cargo together." He said it with all seriousness. His job security, after all, depended on things going smoothly.
 
Val nodded. He pointed towards the arm dangling out of the bag. "Before we both vanish, you might want to get your cargo together." He said it with all seriousness. His job security, after all, depended on things going smoothly.

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