Editing Lambs to the Slaughter

Jump to: navigation, search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision Your text
Line 17: Line 17:
 
Some of the soldiers tried to run at the terrible sound, but fear held them fast and the conflict within tore them apart; they turned their weapons on themselves, cut open their own bellies, or simply bled as their skin split apart.  Three score soldiers died right then.   
 
Some of the soldiers tried to run at the terrible sound, but fear held them fast and the conflict within tore them apart; they turned their weapons on themselves, cut open their own bellies, or simply bled as their skin split apart.  Three score soldiers died right then.   
  
The survivors paled, they sweat, they cried.  But their commander pushed them forward with his shield, harangued them from amidst their ranks, shouted for them to draw in.  Slowly, with fearful steps and in numbers twenty deep, they surrounded the Prince Resplendent.
+
The survivors paled, they sweat, they cried.  But their commander pushed them forward with his shield, harangued them from amidst their ranks, shouted for them to draw in.  Slowly, with fearful steps, in number twenty deep, they surrounded the Prince Resplendent.
  
 
That's when the bloodbath began.  The deathknight was a Glorious Carnage Typhoon; his was an Elegant Bloodletting Art.  He swept his giant blade right and claimed a dozen heads.  He charged his spiked pauldrons left and crushed five hearts.  He was everywhere a reaper.  He hunted them in the throng, left them no time for prayer.  Fighters died all around, swords fell from dead hands, and the ground streamed blood!
 
That's when the bloodbath began.  The deathknight was a Glorious Carnage Typhoon; his was an Elegant Bloodletting Art.  He swept his giant blade right and claimed a dozen heads.  He charged his spiked pauldrons left and crushed five hearts.  He was everywhere a reaper.  He hunted them in the throng, left them no time for prayer.  Fighters died all around, swords fell from dead hands, and the ground streamed blood!

Please note that all contributions to RPGnet may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource (see RPGnet:Copyrights for details). Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)