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She's a MacAllister and MacAllisters '''always''' come home.<br><br>  
 
She's a MacAllister and MacAllisters '''always''' come home.<br><br>  
  
A few whiteknuckled seconds later, it looks like they've dodged the bullet. Even so, Rachel doesn't linger but flies all the way back to Beylix … <br><br>
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A few whiteknuckled seconds later, it looks like they've dodged the bullet. Even so, Rachel doesn't linger but flies all the way back to Beylix … and … thanks to the damage the ship has taken on, Beylix is coming up really really REALLY FAST. Valentine hails the main spaceport and apologizes on the open channel for the trouble he's about to cause.<br><br>  
  
 
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'''Valentine:''' We have a Reaver behind us. You might want to point your satellite missiles at it. I'm just sayin'. I'm sorry to be running full spead through your atmosphere, Chief Yu Yang, but … we've got Reavers behind us. I'm sorry.<br>
'''Friday, 16 Mar 2525'''<br>
 
'''Beylix Airspace'''<br><br>
 
 
 
… And … thanks to the damage the ship has taken on, Beylix is coming up really really REALLY FAST. Valentine hails the main spaceport and apologizes on the open channel for the trouble he's about to cause.<br><br>
 
 
 
'''Valentine:''' We have a Reaver behind us. You might want to point your satellite missiles at it. I'm just sayin'. I'm sorry to be running full speed through your atmosphere, Chief Yu Yang, but … we've got Reavers behind us. I'm sorry.<br>
 
 
'''Tian:''' I bet the ground crews have got money changing hands, cuz there's no way we're landing this without splatting.<br><br>
 
'''Tian:''' I bet the ground crews have got money changing hands, cuz there's no way we're landing this without splatting.<br><br>
  
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Did we just survive?<br><br>
 
Did we just survive?<br><br>
  
''Blink.''<br><br>
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Blink.<br><br>
  
''Blink.''<br><br>
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Blink.<br><br>
  
 
Yup.<br><br>
 
Yup.<br><br>
  
'''''WOOO‼!'''''<br><br>
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WOOO‼!<br><br>
  
 
The crew shakes off their shock and celebrates their victory. Nuri smiles and says we did good. Tian swears Rachel free drinks for life. Vikki works on putting out the starboard thruster fire and gives Valentine the sisterboards. In all the excitement, she forgot she'd shoved them in her bag. In addition to the sisterboards, they've got a cargo hold full of salvage—equipment, parts, and more that will net them a good amount of money.<br><br>
 
The crew shakes off their shock and celebrates their victory. Nuri smiles and says we did good. Tian swears Rachel free drinks for life. Vikki works on putting out the starboard thruster fire and gives Valentine the sisterboards. In all the excitement, she forgot she'd shoved them in her bag. In addition to the sisterboards, they've got a cargo hold full of salvage—equipment, parts, and more that will net them a good amount of money.<br><br>

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