Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 203: Captures from the Past, Part 3
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'''Valentine:''' No, actually I feel pretty strongly that it is.<br><br> | '''Valentine:''' No, actually I feel pretty strongly that it is.<br><br> | ||
− | Rachel has her pride and a mess of bad old memories goading her toward a fight. So she hauls back to deliver another punch when Weasel grabs both her wrists quick as a flash and slams them together … holding them and squeezing them tight, all the while his eyes glitter just this side of madness over a feral grin. And ''that'' is when Rachel realizes Weasel is not merely a dangerous thug but a psychopath capable of killing her without compunction or remorse. <br><br> | + | Rachel has her pride and a mess of bad old memories goading her toward a fight. So she hauls back to deliver another punch when Weasel grabs both her wrists quick as a flash and slams them together … holding them and squeezing them tight, all the while his eyes glitter just this side of madness over a feral grin. And ''that''' is when Rachel realizes Weasel is not merely a dangerous thug but a psychopath capable of killing her without compunction or remorse. <br><br> |
'''Valentine:''' (off Rachel's look) … Oh, gorram hell …<br><br> | '''Valentine:''' (off Rachel's look) … Oh, gorram hell …<br><br> |