Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 203: Captures from the Past, Part 3

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Tian throws him a look of supreme incomprehension. What?! A second later, she puts her hands up and gets clear of that business. <br><br>
 
Tian throws him a look of supreme incomprehension. What?! A second later, she puts her hands up and gets clear of that business. <br><br>
  
'''Tian:''' I don't know anything anyway. I'm going to set up my clinic and get started on doing that for several days. And put in an appearance at the local hospital. Other than that, the possibility exists that ... um … the Alliance may try to send somebody in to extract the team.<br>
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'''Tian:''' I don't know anything anyway. I'm going to set up my clinic and get started on doing that for several days. And put in an appearance eat the local hospital. Other than that, the possibility exists that ... um … the Alliance may try to send somebody in to extract the team.<br>
 
'''Valentine:''' Is that possible?<br>
 
'''Valentine:''' Is that possible?<br>
 
'''Tian:''' (sadly) … I don't know. As far as I know, and what I know is very sketchy because David didn't tell me a lot about what his squad looked like, my best guess is you've got a relatively young squad of a sergeant and people like David. Young. Relatively green. This was supposed to be something simple that was not going to be a big deal and it turned into a bigger deal.<br>
 
'''Tian:''' (sadly) … I don't know. As far as I know, and what I know is very sketchy because David didn't tell me a lot about what his squad looked like, my best guess is you've got a relatively young squad of a sergeant and people like David. Young. Relatively green. This was supposed to be something simple that was not going to be a big deal and it turned into a bigger deal.<br>

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