Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 203: Captures from the Past, Part 3

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'''Rachel:''' We ain't buyin' her a new son.<br><br>
 
'''Rachel:''' We ain't buyin' her a new son.<br><br>
  
Some days Valentine is less captain and more cat herder. This apparently is one of those days. Valentine gives Tian's hand a squeeze and waits for Tian to meet his eye. To hell with the kibitzing from the rest of the crew. Tian is his main concern right now. When Tian finally looks at him, he says with utter conviction:<br><br>
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Some days Valentine is less captain and more cat herder. This apparently is one of those days. Valentine gives Tian's hand a squeeze and waits for Tian to meet his eye. To hell with the kibitzing form the rest of the crew. Tian is his main concern right now. When Tian finally looks at him, he says with utter conviction:<br><br>
  
 
'''Valentine:''' You're my ''crew''. And it seems that means you're ''family''. If so, then giving up the shuttle or negotiating a drug deal or whatever it happens to be, if that's what we need to do to get your son out, then we'll do it.<br><br>
 
'''Valentine:''' You're my ''crew''. And it seems that means you're ''family''. If so, then giving up the shuttle or negotiating a drug deal or whatever it happens to be, if that's what we need to do to get your son out, then we'll do it.<br><br>

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