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'''Vikki:''' So what is it? A key of Dust or what?<br> | '''Vikki:''' So what is it? A key of Dust or what?<br> | ||
− | '''Valentine:''' No, we're not going | + | '''Valentine:''' No, we're not going to—<br> |
− | '''Vikki:''' ''I know''. We're not | + | '''Vikki:''' ''I know''. We're not looking inside it.<br> |
− | '''Valentine:''' And we're not going to ask. So would you | + | '''Valentine:''' And we're not going to ask. So would you please ''stop shaking it''?<br><br> |
Ooops. Vikki goes still.<br><br> | Ooops. Vikki goes still.<br><br> | ||
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'''Tian:''' Whitefall is apparently … well, obviously they sent the recon guys there for a reason. It's in the middle of … call it civil …?<br> | '''Tian:''' Whitefall is apparently … well, obviously they sent the recon guys there for a reason. It's in the middle of … call it civil …?<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' Unrest?<br> | '''Valentine:''' Unrest?<br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' Yeah, there you go | + | '''Tian:''' Yeah, there you go. A separatist group. Wants nothing to do with the Alliance, wants nothing to do with the Independents, wants nothing to do with pretty much anybody. AAANNND the Alliance is sending "advisors" into a variety of places that are fracturing, basically reestablishing the power base as you would expect. David's squad was a part of that and … was taken by the splinter group. <br> |
'''Vikki:''' Ooooh, I'm so sorry.<br> | '''Vikki:''' Ooooh, I'm so sorry.<br> | ||
'''Tian:''' Zhang has some feelers out and there is the possibility of maybe talking with the splinter group. But here's where it gets dicey … (long pause) …<br> | '''Tian:''' Zhang has some feelers out and there is the possibility of maybe talking with the splinter group. But here's where it gets dicey … (long pause) …<br> | ||
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'''Tian:''' The contact that he's got is an opium distributer. <br> | '''Tian:''' The contact that he's got is an opium distributer. <br> | ||
'''Vikki:''' Huh. Imagine that.<br> | '''Vikki:''' Huh. Imagine that.<br> | ||
− | '''Valentine:''' And | + | '''Valentine:''' And this distributer? Who are they?<br> |
'''Tian:''' Is the name going to mean anything to you at this point?<br> | '''Tian:''' Is the name going to mean anything to you at this point?<br> | ||
− | '''Valentine:''' It actually might | + | '''Valentine:''' It actually might at this point.<br> |
'''Tian:''' Fatima Akbari?<br> | '''Tian:''' Fatima Akbari?<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' No … I don't think so. Maybe he could be, for all I know.<br> | '''Valentine:''' No … I don't think so. Maybe he could be, for all I know.<br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' Apparently she's the middle man | + | '''Tian:''' Apparently she's the middle man for the lady who runs Whitefall—Patience Somebody—and the group calling themselves the Lakota after an Old Earth indigenous people or something?<br> |
'''Valentine:''' Running into a lot of Old Earth today.<br> | '''Valentine:''' Running into a lot of Old Earth today.<br> | ||
'''Vikki:''' Maybe we can sue for his release?<br> | '''Vikki:''' Maybe we can sue for his release?<br> | ||
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'''Tian:''' I don't know anything anyway. I'm going to set up my clinic and get started on doing that for several days. And put in an appearance at the local hospital. Other than that, the possibility exists that ... um … the Alliance may try to send somebody in to extract the team.<br> | '''Tian:''' I don't know anything anyway. I'm going to set up my clinic and get started on doing that for several days. And put in an appearance at the local hospital. Other than that, the possibility exists that ... um … the Alliance may try to send somebody in to extract the team.<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' Is that possible?<br> | '''Valentine:''' Is that possible?<br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' (sadly) … I don't know. As far as I know | + | '''Tian:''' (sadly) … I don't know. As far as I know and what I know is very sketchy, because David didn't tell me a lot about what his squad looked like, my best guess is you've got a relatively young squad of a sergeant and people like David. Relatively green. This was supposed to be something simple that was not going to be a big deal and it turned into a bigger deal.<br> |
'''Vikki:''' Yeah, that's what Custer thought.<br> | '''Vikki:''' Yeah, that's what Custer thought.<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' Really, Vikki? You have to make ''that'' reference?<br> | '''Valentine:''' Really, Vikki? You have to make ''that'' reference?<br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' Zhang seemed to think that the Alliance could in fact send | + | '''Tian:''' Zhang seemed to think that the Alliance could in fact send someone in to save face, because this is a face-saving situation. But … honestly, Val, I don't know how to read this one. I am not a tactician. Militarily speaking, I don't know what the Alliance has going. I don’t know what stake they have in keeping Whitefall under their thumb or whether they will feel the need to save face on the planet.<br><br> |
Valentine thinks for a moment and spies Poco slipping into the lounge with Rachel.<br><br> | Valentine thinks for a moment and spies Poco slipping into the lounge with Rachel.<br><br> | ||
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'''Valentine:''' Poco is going to hate this particular suggestion but—<br> | '''Valentine:''' Poco is going to hate this particular suggestion but—<br> | ||
'''Poco:''' (ill) I already hate it.<br> | '''Poco:''' (ill) I already hate it.<br> | ||
− | '''Valentine:''' Good, cuz it's the kind of suggestion I want to make if you're going to hate it. This strikes me as the kind of situation | + | '''Valentine:''' Good, cuz it's the kind of suggestion I want to make if you're going to hate it. This strikes me as the kind of situation is what's needed is careful precision and tactful diplomacy and the Alliance is going to bring a hammer.<br> |
− | '''Tian:''' (nodding) Hence why I need a few days if we have them to be able to sit and wait to see what this contact of Zhang's can do. We might be able to offer her something and she might be willing to act as middle man between us and the Lakota. | + | '''Tian:''' (nodding) Hence why I need a few days if we have them to be able to sit and wait to see what this contact of Zhang's can do. We might be able to offer her something and she might be willing to act as middle man between us and the Lakota.<br><br> |
Tian pauses, as if unsure if she should say more. Then:<br><br> | Tian pauses, as if unsure if she should say more. Then:<br><br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' I am not unwilling to take David's entire squad out of harm's way. It would not even necessarily, as much as I hate to say this | + | '''Tian:''' I am not unwilling to take David's entire squad out of harm's way. It would not even necessarily, as much as I hate to say this, I'm not entirely sure that David needs to know that we're involved or that I was involved in any fashion. It would allow him to go back to his career. The only thing I want out of this is that he be aware of the danger that Christian poses. <br><br> |
Valentine lets this sink in a beat.<br><br> | Valentine lets this sink in a beat.<br><br> | ||
− | '''Valentine:''' So … if a third party were to negotiate him out of the grip of the Lakota, without direct intervention from the Alliance or | + | '''Valentine:''' So … if a third party were to negotiate him out of the grip of the Lakota, without direct intervention from the Alliance or without the Alliance even knowing what was happening, would that interfere with David's career?<br> |
'''Tian:''' Val, I don't know. ''I don't know'' what pull Christian has, I don't know what pull that … woman … has? And what that could do—I just don't know.<br> | '''Tian:''' Val, I don't know. ''I don't know'' what pull Christian has, I don't know what pull that … woman … has? And what that could do—I just don't know.<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' (calmly) I'm offering depth.<br> | '''Valentine:''' (calmly) I'm offering depth.<br> | ||
'''Tian:''' I know. I know you are. And I don't have an answer for you yet.<br> | '''Tian:''' I know. I know you are. And I don't have an answer for you yet.<br> | ||
'''Valentine:''' Okay. Just keep it in mind. Let's just sit here for a couple of days. See what they can offer. <br> | '''Valentine:''' Okay. Just keep it in mind. Let's just sit here for a couple of days. See what they can offer. <br> | ||
− | '''Tian:''' The only thing I can tell you is I want my son. If that means I have to go in | + | '''Tian:''' The only thing I can tell you is I want my son. If that means I have to go in alone, ''then I will go''.<br><br> |
Go in alone. Yeah. She's that desperate.<br><br> | Go in alone. Yeah. She's that desperate.<br><br> |