Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 211: Crucible, Part 2

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So she's running, keeping the rescuees moving, trying to find some way out of this mess. She's left her bag aboard ''Delilah'', is down to just the tools she might have had in her pockets and her wits. Vikki's scared but for the sake of the people with her—especially the kids—she hides it as best as she can. Only one of the children can actually hear. A blessing. The other two can't hear the hideous baying of Reavers on their tail but even so, there's no disguising the fact that they're out there. Her charges are well aware that the Reavers are the reason they're in this mess. <br><br>
 
So she's running, keeping the rescuees moving, trying to find some way out of this mess. She's left her bag aboard ''Delilah'', is down to just the tools she might have had in her pockets and her wits. Vikki's scared but for the sake of the people with her—especially the kids—she hides it as best as she can. Only one of the children can actually hear. A blessing. The other two can't hear the hideous baying of Reavers on their tail but even so, there's no disguising the fact that they're out there. Her charges are well aware that the Reavers are the reason they're in this mess. <br><br>
  
That mess thankfully does not include hard injuries, nothing more than some scrapes and bruises. It does include thigh-high water, reeds, mud, grasses. More salt marsh and less bayou, actually. The entire time she and the settlers are making their way through it, Vikki's keeping track of the Reaver's progress behind them. The Reavers can't see them but she's fairly certain they're using their ears and noses to track them. Sloshing through a salt marsh isn't a silent business and as for their sense of smell? Vikki doesn't want to lay odds that it isn't somehow as keen as bloodhounds. <br><br>
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That mess thankfully does not include hard injuries, nothing more than some scrapes a bruises. It does include thigh-high water, reeds, mud, grasses. More salt marsh and less bayou, actually. The entire time she and the settlers are making their way through it, Vikki's keeping track of the Reaver's progress behind them. The Reavers can't see them but she's fairly certain they're using their ears and noses to track them. Sloshing through a salt marsh isn't a silent business and as for their sense of smell? Vikki doesn't want to lay odds that it isn't somehow as keen as bloodhounds. <br><br>
  
 
Something from her years of reading surfaces: bloodhounds and dogs of that sort can't smell through water. If there were some way she and the others could go underwater without drowning … <br><br>
 
Something from her years of reading surfaces: bloodhounds and dogs of that sort can't smell through water. If there were some way she and the others could go underwater without drowning … <br><br>

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