Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 213: Misapprehensions, Part 2

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As we near the mission, we see people standing in the field, looking around with a puzzled look. Even though they saw us arrive earlier, they're still surprised to see us. Apparently they don't get a lot of ships through here, much less visitors.<br><br>  
 
As we near the mission, we see people standing in the field, looking around with a puzzled look. Even though they saw us arrive earlier, they're still surprised to see us. Apparently they don't get a lot of ships through here, much less visitors.<br><br>  
  
Valentine debates how to ''Delilah''. If hostiles have already boarded her, we'll be walking right into their hands. He flies the shuttle in a tight circle around our ship so we can inspect her from the outside first.<br><br>
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Valentine debates how to ''Delilah''. If hostiles have already boarded her, we'll be walking right into their hands. He has Rachel circle our ship so we can inspect her from the outside first.<br><br>
  
 
'''Tian:''' Poco, you're not carrying the spare, are you?<br>
 
'''Tian:''' Poco, you're not carrying the spare, are you?<br>

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