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<span style="color:#800000"> '''''Back to the synopsis format ... (Sees word count) ... Well, as much as I can manage, anyway.—Maer'''''</span><br><br><br>
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<span style="color:#800000"> '''''Back to the synopsis format. (Sees word count) Well, as much as I can manage, anyway.—Maer'''''</span><br><br><br>
  
 
''Air Date: 19 Oct 2014''<br>
 
''Air Date: 19 Oct 2014''<br>
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'''Blue Sun (Qing Long) system'''<br><br>
 
'''Blue Sun (Qing Long) system'''<br><br>
  
Nuri says goodbye to the crew. She wants to stay on New Canaan and continue her training with the monks at the monastery. They've really helped her find the mental quiet essential to her recovery. She goes to each crew member individually to say goodbye. <br><br>
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Nuri says goodbye to the crew. She wants to stay on New Canaan and continue her training with the monks at the monastery. They've really helped her train her mind and the mental quiet is essential to her recovery. She goes to each crew member individually to say goodbye. <br><br>
  
She goes to Valentine first, makes her intentions known. She needs to stay behind, for her health and sanity … and for the crew's safety. She also says that Tian poses a possible danger to the crew and to please look after her. Valentine thanks her for her honesty, her candor, and her warning. He says he's sorry to see her go but wishes her well, assuring her that she's made the right choice and that he supports her decision. Will she be all right? Her health isn't perfect and her transplanted heart might still cause her problems. Nuri assures him that she feels she will be fine, that every day she got after the transplant operation is an extra, a lagniappe, in a life that was meant to end sooner. <br><br>
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She goes to Valentine first, makes her intentions known. She needs to stay behind, for her health and sanity … and for the crew's safety. She also says that Tian poses a possible danger to the crew and to please look after her. Valentine thanks her for her honesty, herr candor, and her He says he's sorry to see her go but wishes her well, assuring her that she's made the right choice and that he supports her decision. Will she be all right? Her health isn't perfect and her transplanted heart might still cause her problems. Nuri assures him that she feels she will be fine, that every day she got after the transplant operation is an extra, a lagniappe, in a life that was meant to end sooner. <br><br>
  
 
Nuri goes to Vikki next. Nuri tells her that Vikki was her first real friend and that she'll always remember her for that. Vikki gets teary-eyed but hugs Nuri long and tight and wishes her well. Both promise to write. Vikki offers to make them both tea and when she runs off to put the kettle on, Nuri slips away to say goodbye to Rachel.<br><br>
 
Nuri goes to Vikki next. Nuri tells her that Vikki was her first real friend and that she'll always remember her for that. Vikki gets teary-eyed but hugs Nuri long and tight and wishes her well. Both promise to write. Vikki offers to make them both tea and when she runs off to put the kettle on, Nuri slips away to say goodbye to Rachel.<br><br>
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Nuri tells her a little bit about what she'd witnessed aboard the Reaver ship, of what they did to Tian, of how they'd left Nuri alone. There is evidence to support the idea that the Reavers recognized something in Tian's make-up that made her special to them, that perhaps she could become one of them … or perhaps communicate with them or for them. There are a lot of tantalizing hints and suppositions, but the overall impression is that there's a connection between the Reavers and Tian, that they have something in common. <br><br>
 
Nuri tells her a little bit about what she'd witnessed aboard the Reaver ship, of what they did to Tian, of how they'd left Nuri alone. There is evidence to support the idea that the Reavers recognized something in Tian's make-up that made her special to them, that perhaps she could become one of them … or perhaps communicate with them or for them. There are a lot of tantalizing hints and suppositions, but the overall impression is that there's a connection between the Reavers and Tian, that they have something in common. <br><br>
  
That commonality might be a danger to the crew but it also is an important key—perhapts the ultimate key—to unlock the puzzle that the Reavers represent. Nuri cannot say for certain but of one thing she is sure: she tells Tian that the doctor must give herself permission to feel the dreams and the voices in her head. To look on the Cortex for the stories, the stories of Reavers, of "the lost ones". Tian has a chance to understand the Reaver mind and to remain sane. When the time comes, she must get away from Valentine and Vikki and Rachel and Poco and ''feel''. <br><br>
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That commonality might be a danger to the crew but it also is an important key—perhapts the ultimate key—to unlock the puzzle that the Reavers represent. Nuri cannot say for certain but of one thing she is sure: she tells Tian that the doctor must give herself permission to feel the dreams and the voices in her head. To look on the Cortex for the stories, the stories of Reavers, of "the lost ones". Tian has a chance to understand the Reaver mind and to remain sane. When the tiem comes, she must get away from Valentine and Vikki and Rachel and Poco and feel. <br><br>
  
 
On that note, Nuri hugs Tian goodbye and walks off the ship. <br><br>
 
On that note, Nuri hugs Tian goodbye and walks off the ship. <br><br>

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