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I hung over him as he spoke with others of his kind, easily avoiding the eyes of his more sorcerous companions.  He traveled, his pace laboriously slow, but the sunfire at his core grew with each step.  The seventh cord broke.  My tongue twitched, and I took on a form that would not shatter his mind.  I knelt before him and stretched out my hands, giving him the box.
 
I hung over him as he spoke with others of his kind, easily avoiding the eyes of his more sorcerous companions.  He traveled, his pace laboriously slow, but the sunfire at his core grew with each step.  The seventh cord broke.  My tongue twitched, and I took on a form that would not shatter his mind.  I knelt before him and stretched out my hands, giving him the box.
  
He removed the lid and saw its contents.  The eighth cord broke.  He removed [[Lun Kuai's Letter|a letter]] written in the old tongue, seemingly unable to decipher its words, until he reached its very end.  Then he looked at me, and with measured precision said, “You have served well.  Return to Malfeas and your duty is ended.”
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He removed the lid and saw its contents.  The eighth cord broke.  He removed a letter written in the old tongue, seemingly unable to decipher its words, until he reached its very end.  Then he looked at me, and with measured precision said, “You have served well.  Return to Malfeas and your duty is ended.”
  
 
Creation twisted around me and spat me back into the world-body of the First.  As soon as the green light washed over me, the ninth cord broke, and I was free.  Free and imprisoned once again.  But no cage is eternal, and I will walk Creation again.  Whatever face he wears, I will know his smell.   
 
Creation twisted around me and spat me back into the world-body of the First.  As soon as the green light washed over me, the ninth cord broke, and I was free.  Free and imprisoned once again.  But no cage is eternal, and I will walk Creation again.  Whatever face he wears, I will know his smell.   

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