Editing Lessons, Part 2

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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The Universe possessed a truly twisted sense of humor.  Damn her contrary hide.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The Universe possessed a truly twisted sense of humor.  Damn her contrary hide.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I gathered my courage with my thoughts and plowed on.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I gathered my courage with my thoughts and plowed on.<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"I realize that I've dropped the ball and given you two different things to deal with instead of one, but they're kind of related. Because of the one, I'm still getting the hang of the other. And that's bound to lead to some confusion sooner or later. I thought giving you a little explanation and a warning would head some of it off and spare you some worry. You have this tendency," and here I grinned wryly and resumed my seat, "to automatically assume it's your fault. Trust me, it won't be. Not ''all'' the time. And that's it, really.”<br>  
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"I realize that I've dropped the ball and given you two different things to deal with instead of one, but they're kind of related. Because of the one, I'm still getting the hang of the other. And that's bound to lead to some confusion sooner or later. I thought giving you a little explanation and a warning would some of it head off and spare you some worry. You have this tendency," and here I grinned wryly and resumed my seat, "to automatically assume it's your fault. Trust me, it won't be. Not ''all'' the time. And that's it, really.”<br>  
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Because if I didn’t stop now, I wouldn’t be able to at all and we’d both drown in the words.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Because if I didn’t stop now, I wouldn’t be able to at all and we’d both drown in the words.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“If you have any points you want clarified, now's the time to ask."<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“If you have any points you want clarified, now's the time to ask."<br>

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