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''"Crimson Fang." Another voice, serene and kind of gender-neutral, and''
 
''"Crimson Fang." Another voice, serene and kind of gender-neutral, and''
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''the camera rolls over to - a large, rather obese man with the build and''
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''the camera roll sover to- a large, rather obese man with the build and''
 
''serene smile of a Buddha. His earlobes hang almost down to his''
 
''serene smile of a Buddha. His earlobes hang almost down to his''
 
''shoulders, weighed down with heavy gold rings. His forehead is painted''
 
''shoulders, weighed down with heavy gold rings. His forehead is painted''

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