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I left it vague, but the idea was that a harsh, not terribly competent ruler takes over kingdom and, to maintain support and appear legitimate, sends out search parties for brother of old king who disappeared a decade ago while the tyrant "rules in his stead". | I left it vague, but the idea was that a harsh, not terribly competent ruler takes over kingdom and, to maintain support and appear legitimate, sends out search parties for brother of old king who disappeared a decade ago while the tyrant "rules in his stead". | ||
β | Fast forward to a few years later. The tyrant is hated and one of the search parties finds a slaughtered caravan, with lots of dead monsters and one surviving woman with terrible head wounds. As they search the caravan, they find lots of evidence the people in it were wealthy, including melted jewelry that from the right angle looks a lot like the emblems | + | Fast forward to a few years later. The tyrant is hated and one of the search parties finds a slaughtered caravan, with lots of dead monsters and one surviving woman with terrible head wounds. As they search the caravan, they find lots of evidence the people in it were wealthy, including melted jewelry that from the right angle looks a lot like the emblems if the kingdom. |
Then the first scene happens. | Then the first scene happens. | ||
β | News spreads ahead of her arrival in the kingdom, and by the time Chocolat is back the tyrant feels he must legitimize her and use her to keep his own power. But she has also become a symbol for those who want a revolution. The tyrant becomes more and more suspicious and threatening until finally he accuses her of trying to overthrow him and orders her seized in public. Then the second scene happens when he badly misjudged the loyalty | + | News spreads ahead of her arrival in the kingdom, and by the time Chocolat is back the tyrant feels he must legitimize her and use her to keep his own power. But she has also become a symbol for those who want a revolution. The tyrant becomes more and more suspicious and threatening until finally he accuses her of trying to overthrow him and orders her seized in public. Then the second scene happens when he badly misjudged the loyalty if his guards on that day. |