Editing Marco Domici: Angeline Harbok

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McKenzie huffed. "We are the only ones authorized to perform autopsies in the city, detective. I assure you..."
 
McKenzie huffed. "We are the only ones authorized to perform autopsies in the city, detective. I assure you..."
  
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"That no one will hear you squeal when a bunch of mercenaries stuff your stupid attitude, along with your whiner voice, into a trashcan and carry Mister Domici to their facility." Ang blew smoke again, and smiled. "This is Brigade Sergeant Major Aldo Domici, retired. You are welcome to face a bunch of professional killers if you like, I certainly won't stand in your way. Or you can play the game and keep everyone happy and thus less likely to shoot you. Your call."
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"That no one will hear you squeal when a bunch of mercenaries stuff your stupid attitude, along with your whiner voice, into a trashcan and carry Mister Domici to their facility." Ang blew smoke again, and smiled. "This is Master Sergeant Aldo Domici, retired. You are welcome to face a bunch of professional killers if you like, I certainly won't stand in your way. Or you can play the game and keep everyone happy and thus less likely to shoot you. Your call."
  
 
Ang stomped out of the mortuary and drove away. She passed her office, then her dingy apartment. She just drove away.
 
Ang stomped out of the mortuary and drove away. She passed her office, then her dingy apartment. She just drove away.

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