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They sat quiet for a while. "One minute." Balt's voice was clear.  
 
They sat quiet for a while. "One minute." Balt's voice was clear.  
  
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"No enemy in sight, sir." Jonathan called down. "All vehicles in the convoy proceeding as planned. Wait...one vehicle moving off to the side." Jonathan looked through the enhanced sights. "Oscar Three dismounting and moving to position."
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"No enemy in sight, sir." Jonathan called down. "All vehicles in the convoy proceeding as planned. Wait...one vehicle moving off to the side." Jonathan looked through the enhanced sights. "Oscar Two dismounting and moving to position."
  
 
"You sound like a war vid." Max grumped. Right before Monika smacked the back of his head.  
 
"You sound like a war vid." Max grumped. Right before Monika smacked the back of his head.  
  
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"Ten seconds." Balt called back. Their truck had passed Oscar Three, one of the over watch sniper teams. It veered off slightly. "Let's go! Move!"
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"Ten seconds." Balt called back. Their truck had passed Oscar Two, one of the over watch sniper teams. It veered off slightly. "Let's go! Move!"
  
 
Max was first out as Balt come from the front. Monika started out, and then quickly turned and pulled Jonathan around for a kiss. Then she was out the back and followed by Hair, who grunted when she landed and fell.  
 
Max was first out as Balt come from the front. Monika started out, and then quickly turned and pulled Jonathan around for a kiss. Then she was out the back and followed by Hair, who grunted when she landed and fell.  
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"Ain't nothing gonna happen." Max said. He snuggled in with his carbine. "Are we really gonna freeze out here while everyone else gets to party?"
 
"Ain't nothing gonna happen." Max said. He snuggled in with his carbine. "Are we really gonna freeze out here while everyone else gets to party?"
  
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Balt muttered under his breath. "We protect the over watch team if something happens, Max. That's what this is about." He ran the scope all around, as well as up and down. Their truck and the transport vehicle for Oscar Three circled opposite directions around town while the rest of the convoy rolled in.  
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Balt muttered under his breath. "We protect the over watch team if something happens, Max. That's what this is about." He ran the scope all around, as well as up and down. Their truck and the transport vehicle for Oscar Two circled opposite directions around town while the rest of the convoy rolled in.  
  
 
"We may not be in a friendly place, folks." Balt said, keeping his scans going. "Besides, this is a chance to try out new tactics and comms. The vehicles scout around the city, we keep the escape route clear, and the Guide learns new tactics."
 
"We may not be in a friendly place, folks." Balt said, keeping his scans going. "Besides, this is a chance to try out new tactics and comms. The vehicles scout around the city, we keep the escape route clear, and the Guide learns new tactics."

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