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With some effort they located Jillia. The hostage rescue team fumbled for how to carry her out and secure her load. Eventually they just parceled out bits and drug her out to the command vehicle.  
 
With some effort they located Jillia. The hostage rescue team fumbled for how to carry her out and secure her load. Eventually they just parceled out bits and drug her out to the command vehicle.  
  
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"Good job everyone." Marco started. They had moved the command vehicle and the truck to the house so everyone could be in the debrief.  
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"Good job everyone." Marco started. They had moved the command vehicle to the house so everyone could be in the debrief.  
  
 
"We did lousy." Milton replied, snorting. He was the second eldest of Hotel Two.  
 
"We did lousy." Milton replied, snorting. He was the second eldest of Hotel Two.  

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