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'''At the gates of the Manse...'''
 
'''At the gates of the Manse...'''
  
Mari, Seven, Shy, and Kraik ascend the mountain. They must climb up through the cloud bank that hugs the mountain peak. A temple sits against a part of the mountain peak, and the Unconquered Sun shines down brightly upon the group. His rays reflect off the light brown stone and white marble that are everywhere.
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Mari, Seven, Shy, and Kraik ascend the mountain. They must climb up through the cloud bank that hugs the mountain peak. A temple sits againt a part of the mountain peak. The Unconquered Sun shines down brightly upon the group. His rays reflect off the light brown stone and white marble that lay everywhere.
  
 
A set of double doors are the entrance the manse. Flanking each door is a statue like at the ledge down below.
 
A set of double doors are the entrance the manse. Flanking each door is a statue like at the ledge down below.
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"Wooooo. This place is big. And shiny," Mari comments on the obvious.  
 
"Wooooo. This place is big. And shiny," Mari comments on the obvious.  
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"Oooh, baldy statues!" she giggles, reaching out to rub the bald heads.
 
"Oooh, baldy statues!" she giggles, reaching out to rub the bald heads.
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The statues come to life as she touches each one. Light creates a halo around each one as they step off of their platforms. The stone becomes flesh once their feet touch earth. "Who seeks entrance to the temple of light?" They speak over the top of each other, not in synchronicity like the twin brothers from the burning barge.  
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The statues come to life as she touches each one. Light creates a halo around each one as they step off of their platforms. The stone becomes flesh once their feet touch earth. "Who seeks entrance to the temple of light?" They speak over the top of each other, not syncronicity like the twin brothers.  
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Mari blinks at their transformation. "You can walk? Ooooooh..."  
 
Mari blinks at their transformation. "You can walk? Ooooooh..."  
  
She continues poking them; and delight fills her eyes as she confirms with her hands that they really are made of flesh. They do not react to her poking, although each contact does generate a ripple of light from where she touched them.
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She continues poking them; and delight fills her eyes as she confirms with her hands that they really are made of flesh.
  
 
"You're meat! Meatpeople!"
 
"You're meat! Meatpeople!"
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It's not terribly elegant, but then again, Mari has never been terribly elegant.
 
It's not terribly elegant, but then again, Mari has never been terribly elegant.
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"You are welcome. The Temple of Light may only be held by those of virtue. The shining light of the Sun demands it."  
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They do not react to her poking. Each touch does illicit a burst of light ringlets as if waves from where she touches. "You are welcomed. The Temple of Light may only be held by those of virtue. The shining light of the Sun demands it."  
  
 
"Vir-tue? What's virtue? Can you eat it?"
 
"Vir-tue? What's virtue? Can you eat it?"
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Seven speaks up from behind her. "Lovely chaps."
 
Seven speaks up from behind her. "Lovely chaps."
  
"Indeed, they are fascinating Mari." Kraik perks up at the back. "This place seems most foul, mistress," mewls Shy from beside her.
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"Indeed, they are fascinating Mari." Kraik perks up at the back. "This place seems most foul mistress," mewls Shy from beside her.
  
 
Mari pauses in her poking of the statues to turn to Shy.
 
Mari pauses in her poking of the statues to turn to Shy.
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"Onward!" Mari smiles cheerfully as she marches into the temple.
 
"Onward!" Mari smiles cheerfully as she marches into the temple.
  
Mari inserts the tiny wing key into the only slot in the doors. The doors blow open with a gust of wind, slamming against the golden backstops. Inside, a crystal dome filters light into a central pool with a large mural set into the pool's floor.
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Mari inserts the tiny wing key into the only slot in the doors. The doors blow open with a gust of wind slamming against the golden backstops. Inside a crystal dome filters light into a central pool with a large mural set into the pool's floor.
  
 
Mari wanders closer to examine the pool, wondering if she should touch the water...
 
Mari wanders closer to examine the pool, wondering if she should touch the water...
  
...as though that ever needed any consideration. She wades in, great splashes disturbing the temple's silence.  
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...as though that ever needed any consideration. She wades in, great splashes disturbing the temple's silence.
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The world around her changes. She feels as if she is falling and she hears the concerned voice of Seven off in the distance as if he is miles away. She now stands in a great banquet hall. Dozens of shinin g men and women watch naked dancers prance and parade for their satisfaction.
 
 
'''The First Flashback'''
 
 
 
The world around her changes. She feels as if she is falling and she hears the concerned voice of Seven off in the distance as if he is miles away.  
 
 
 
But now, she stands in a great banquet hall, where dozens of shining men and women watch naked dancers prance and parade for their satisfaction.
 
  
 
"Huh? Wait! Whoa... what's going on?" she mutters softly, as she watches the celebration, or whatever this event is. Wasn't she just in a pool of a really old temple?
 
"Huh? Wait! Whoa... what's going on?" she mutters softly, as she watches the celebration, or whatever this event is. Wasn't she just in a pool of a really old temple?
  
She looks around and discovers she has rather larger breasts than she remembers and she is much taller. She wears beautifully made dress of essence silk. A man approaches her from behind. He wraps an arm around her and nibbles on her ear.  
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She looks around and discovers she has rather larger breasts than she remembers and she is much taller. She wears beautifully made dress of essence silk. A man approaches her from behind. He wraps an arm around her and nibbles on her ear. "Darling, are you enjoying the celebration?"
 
 
"Darling, are you enjoying the celebration?"
 
  
 
Mari blinks a little as she suddenly realizes her extra... endowment. That, and she's further off the ground than before. She's about to start touching herself to see if she's really bigger when the man grabs her from behind.
 
Mari blinks a little as she suddenly realizes her extra... endowment. That, and she's further off the ground than before. She's about to start touching herself to see if she's really bigger when the man grabs her from behind.
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"U-uh... what celebration?" she asks.
 
"U-uh... what celebration?" she asks.
  
He spins her around so that she faces him, a devilish grin on his face. His face is handsome, with perfect features.  
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He spins her around so that she faces him. A devilish grin on his face. he is handsome with perfect features. "Had too much wine already? The party has barely begun." He frowns when he sees she doesn't seem to recognize what he's talking about. "The party our dragon officers are throwing for us. Remember?"
 
 
"Had too much wine already? The party has barely begun."  
 
 
 
He frowns when he sees she doesn't seem to recognize what he's talking about.  
 
 
 
"The party our dragon officers are throwing for us. Remember?"
 
  
 
"N-no..."  
 
"N-no..."  
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An unbidden instinct tells her to continue pretending to be terribly drunk.
 
An unbidden instinct tells her to continue pretending to be terribly drunk.
  
"Um... who are you? Where is this place? In fact, who am I?" she slurs, with a goofy smile. He laughs at her apparent drunkenness.  
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"Um... who are you? Where is this place? In fact, who am I?" she slurs, with a goofy smile.
  
"Meru, my darling, you're in Meru."
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He laughs at her apparent drunkeness. "Meru, my darling, you're in Meru."he guides her over to a table and pulls a seat back for her. She notices a stylized 5 and moon intertwinded on a silk scarf at the chair he seats her at.
  
He guides her over to a table and pulls a seat back for her. She notices a stylized "5" and a moon intertwinded on a silk scarf at the chair he seats her at.
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She also notices the tint of the skin of the, now erotic, dancers. They are dragon-blooded.
 
 
She also notices the tint of the skin of the now-erotic dancers. They are Dragon-Blooded.
 
  
 
"Ohhhh, Meru..."  she nods lazily. It must be practice from watching Nee-san in the hookerariums, favoring other dancers with a languorous dip of her head.  
 
"Ohhhh, Meru..."  she nods lazily. It must be practice from watching Nee-san in the hookerariums, favoring other dancers with a languorous dip of her head.  
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"Hehe.. I have a mate?" she smiles. "Mmmm, must be like Frost and Nee-san," she thinks. "Tell me about my mate, and about you..."
 
"Hehe.. I have a mate?" she smiles. "Mmmm, must be like Frost and Nee-san," she thinks. "Tell me about my mate, and about you..."
  
"Who?" He seems at a loss for words for a moment. "Well, other than being a right bastard to you, he's a brilliant general in his own right and a fierce fighter. And you are too good for him; why you haven't dominated him like many of the others have their mates is beyond me."
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"Who?" He seems at a loss for words for a moment. "Well, other than being a right bastard to you he's a brilliant general in his own right and a fierce fighter. And you are too good for him, why you haven't dominated him like many of the others have their mates is beyond me."
  
 
"Dominate people? Nahhhh, that's not right. It wouldn't be fair. How about you?"
 
"Dominate people? Nahhhh, that's not right. It wouldn't be fair. How about you?"
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What he says about a mate makes her think, though. Does she have someone out there who's meant for her, like Nee-san has Frost?
 
What he says about a mate makes her think, though. Does she have someone out there who's meant for her, like Nee-san has Frost?
  
"Sweetheart, I'm the best thing to happen to this world, this side of Yu-Shan. Don't let that blowhard Desus tell you otherwise," he gives Mari a wink. He turns around, taking another two drinks off of a passing tray. He sets one in front of her and downs the other in one gulp, before putting his arm around the back of her chair and leaning forward. "Name's Darian." He puts out his hand for her to shake and as she does so he leans in for a kiss.
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"Sweetheart, I'm the best thing to happen to this world, this side of Yu-Shan. Don't let that blow hard Desus tell you otherwise," he gives Mari a wink. He turn s around taking another two drinks off of a passing tray. He sets on in front of her and one in front of himself. He then puts his arm around the back of her chair and leans forward. "Name's Darian." He puts out his hand for her to shake and as she does so he leans in for a kiss.
  
 
"Teehee~" she giggles, accepting his affection. Darian was nice. At least, he treated her nicely; and that was enough for her.  
 
"Teehee~" she giggles, accepting his affection. Darian was nice. At least, he treated her nicely; and that was enough for her.  
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"Calibration my dear." He slides her glass back over to sit in front of him. "I think you've had enough."
 
"Calibration my dear." He slides her glass back over to sit in front of him. "I think you've had enough."
  
"Nyooo~ want drinky~" she pouts as she reaches half-heartedly for the glass.   
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"Nyooo~ drinky~" she pouts as she reaches half-heartedly for the glass.  "Hmm, how about your mate? Won't she be annoyed by how you're spending so much time on me?" she smiles.
 
 
"Hmm, how about your mate? Won't she be annoyed by how you're spending so much time on me?" she smiles.
 
  
 
"Well, if she's not here, and mine's not here, and the two of us are here..." she winks. "Then why don't we have some fun of our own? Dancing, singing... stuff like that."
 
"Well, if she's not here, and mine's not here, and the two of us are here..." she winks. "Then why don't we have some fun of our own? Dancing, singing... stuff like that."
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And there's something inside her which makes her feel a sense of loyalty, perhaps even a bit of pity for her absent Lunar...
 
And there's something inside her which makes her feel a sense of loyalty, perhaps even a bit of pity for her absent Lunar...
  
"That sounds good to me." He smiles as leans in for another kiss. As he gets closer his face is covered in blood and screams. Fire, heat, dying screams, and a dozen Dragon-Blooded close in on her, and ten everything goes black.  
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"That sounds good to me." He smiles as leans in for another kiss. As he gets closer his face is covered in blood and screams. Mari is idling a small crystal orb, recorder...that's what its called. Fire, heat, dying screams, and a dozen dragons close in on her. She disappears. She wakes up coughing water looking up at a giant crystal dome. It's different now, fine statues everywhere then there's nothing but the concerned look of Seven, then she's back in the opulent room staring at her statue servants who help her up.
  
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"Whoa. Whoa whoa whoa. Are we still in Meru?" she asks. :And what happened to my boobs? And my dress? Oh wait, my dress is still here. But my boobs!"
  
'''Back in the Manse...'''
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"Mistress?" Shy ventures, reaching out a hand to her. Mari sighs.  
 
 
She wakes up coughing water looking up at a giant crystal dome. It's different now, fine statues are everywhere, then there's nothing but the concerned look of Seven, then she's back in the opulent room staring at her statue servants who help her up.
 
 
 
"Whoa. Whoa whoa whoa. Are we still in Meru?" she asks. "And what happened to my boobs? And my dress? Oh wait, my dress is still here. But my boobs!"
 
 
 
"Mistress?" Shy ventures, reaching out a hand to her. Mari sighs, accepting the hand.  
 
  
 
"Well, I guess I'm back home again," she says to herself. "Or rather, back here again. Man, I saw the weirdest thing... I thought I was in this place called Meru, and there was this guy called Darian being nice to me, and I had a mate who wasn't there because he wanted to spoil mortal girls..."
 
"Well, I guess I'm back home again," she says to herself. "Or rather, back here again. Man, I saw the weirdest thing... I thought I was in this place called Meru, and there was this guy called Darian being nice to me, and I had a mate who wasn't there because he wanted to spoil mortal girls..."
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"You're in the manse. You passed out more than an hour ago."
 
"You're in the manse. You passed out more than an hour ago."
  
"That's some vision, child," Kraik says as he comb's Mari's hair back over her ears.
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"That's some vision child," kraik says as he wipes Mari's hair out of her eyes.
  
 
"An... hour? But it only felt like a few...:  
 
"An... hour? But it only felt like a few...:  
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She looks down at the strange crystal orb thing in her hands.  
 
She looks down at the strange crystal orb thing in her hands.  
  
"Okay, word of warning, don't step in the water. It makes you see things. Like naked Dragonblooded dancers and people trying to kill you. And stuff."
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"Okay, note to self, don't step in the water. It makes you see things. Like naked Dragonblooded dancers and Dragonblooded trying to kill you. And stuff."
 
 
As the last word escapes her lips she falls unconcious again.
 
 
 
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'''The Second Flashback...'''
 
 
 
She stands atop a floating platform, strapped to a metal pole. She feels drained. Her Essence is being continually drained from her body by the man across from her.
 
 
 
"You will renounce your past actions and be cleansed of the taint upon you, or we will make your death long and horrible."  
 
  
He was...''is'' a Chosen of Endings. His name slips from her mind as he pours the drug down her throat again. Then, he leans in close.  
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As the last word escapes her lips she falls unconcious again. She stands atop a floating platform, strapped to a metal pole. She feels drained. Her essence being kept to a minimum level by the man across from her. "You will renounce your past actions and be cleansed of the taint upon you or we will make your death long and horrible. He was...is a Chosen of Endings. His name slips from her mind as he pours the drug down her throat again. He leans in close. "The dragons seek a spectacle in the few of you that remain. You would be doing me a favor by not renouncing."
  
"The dragons seek a spectacle in the few of you that remain. You would be doing me a favor by not renouncing."
 
  
 
"Oh man... not this shit again... okay, now where am I and what exactly is going on?!"
 
"Oh man... not this shit again... okay, now where am I and what exactly is going on?!"
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She struggles against her bindings. They refuse to budge.
 
She struggles against her bindings. They refuse to budge.
  
"Don't attempt to escape, Five Moons. The reign of the Solar Deliberative is over, forever. We will catch you all and destroy you on by one."
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"Don't attempt to escape Five Moons. The reign of the Solar Deliberative is over, forever. We will catch you all and destroy you on by one."
  
 
"Five... Moons?"
 
"Five... Moons?"
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"Re... cant? What am I supposed to recant? What's a recant, anyway?"
 
"Re... cant? What am I supposed to recant? What's a recant, anyway?"
  
The Sidereal turns from her, facing a crowd.  
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The Sidereal turns from her facing a crowd. "She refuses to give up her corrupt ways. Let the faith in the Dragons spread as one of the former cruel masters of the world dies." He spins around brandishing the jagged bladee, Mari can feel her stomach tear and stretch. Her guts fall to the groun d.  
 
 
"She refuses to give up her corrupt ways. Let the faith in the Dragons spread as one of the former cruel masters of the world dies." He spins around brandishing the jagged blade, Mari can feel her stomach tear and stretch. Her guts fall to the ground.  
 
  
 
"H-hey... my... my insides... you..."
 
"H-hey... my... my insides... you..."
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She looks up to her tormentor, doing her best to memorize his face. Maybe she can find him to kick his ass...
 
She looks up to her tormentor, doing her best to memorize his face. Maybe she can find him to kick his ass...
  
She gasps for air and then she's soaked and wet again, staring at the dome ceiling.
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She gasps for air and then she's soaked and wet aqgain starfing at the dome ceiling.
 
 
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'''Back in the Manse again...'''
 
  
 
"Whoa. This time some purple guy tied me to a pole and made me drink something and then he cut my tummy open."
 
"Whoa. This time some purple guy tied me to a pole and made me drink something and then he cut my tummy open."
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"Okay, that water is really bad for your head," she says.
 
"Okay, that water is really bad for your head," she says.
  
Seven, Kraik, and Shy all looked concernedly at one another.  
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Seven, Kraik, and Shy all looked concernedly at one another. "Ah, mistress you did not have that crystal orb before did you?"
 
 
"Ah, mistress you did not have that crystal orb before did you?" Shy asks
 
  
"This?" she holds up the orb. "No, no I didn't. You think that could have anything to do with it?" she asks.
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"THis?" she holds up the orb. "No, no I didn't. You think that could have anything to do with it?" she asks.
  
 
It has grown in size from a bead to a small ball that fits in the palm of her hand.
 
It has grown in size from a bead to a small ball that fits in the palm of her hand.
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She shows the strange orb off to the others.
 
She shows the strange orb off to the others.
  
Shy looks up at the domed ceiling. "I believe so. There were devices once upon a time much like this. They were originally meant for recording events. Essence channeled images to a dome which could be reactivated when the user desired. They never worked like this however."
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Shy looks up at the domed ceiling. "I b elieve so. There were devices once upon a time much like this. They were originally meant for recording events. Essence channeled images to a dome which could be reactivated when the user desired. They never worked like this however."
  
 
"Really? Wow. Well ,there's a dome up there..." Mari comments.  
 
"Really? Wow. Well ,there's a dome up there..." Mari comments.  
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"Say, do you guys know anything about a silver egg thing in here?" "And did you find anything, Shy?" she asks the demon.
 
"Say, do you guys know anything about a silver egg thing in here?" "And did you find anything, Shy?" she asks the demon.
  
They stare at her wordlessly. The same effect from before happens as she pokes them. She notices Old Realm script lining their edges. The same word is repeated endlessly on each one. Strength. Tenacity. She falls, her head slams into the floor and then dark blue sky drifts above her. The sound of water rhythmically slapping the side of wood. The sound of wind rippling through cloth sails greets her ears as well.
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They stare at he wordlessly, the same effect happens as she pokes them. She notices old realm script lining their edges. The same word is repeated endlessly on each one. Strength. Tenacity. She falls, her head slams into the floor and then dark blue sky drifts above her. The sound of water rhythmically slapping the side of wood. The sound of wind rippling through cloth sails greets her ears as well.
 
 
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'''The Third Flashback...'''
 
  
 
"Wow, is this going to happen every time I do something?" she wonders as she looks around. "Where am I now?" she asks.
 
"Wow, is this going to happen every time I do something?" she wonders as she looks around. "Where am I now?" she asks.
  
"My love, you're on the Western seas." A different man stands over her. He is handsome like a wolf is handsome. His features are sharp, she knows him but can't tell from where. "I'm gladx you woke up. I wouldn't want you to miss this."
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"My love, you're on the western seas." A differnet man stands over her. He is handsome like a wolf is handsome. His features are sharp, she knows him but can't tell from where. "I'm gladx you woke up. I wouldn't want you to miss this."
  
 
"Hmmm, are you Darian?" she asks. "And woo! I'm on a boat!"
 
"Hmmm, are you Darian?" she asks. "And woo! I'm on a boat!"
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"I guess I really messed up, huh," she says quietly. "Or, I'm really messed up."
 
"I guess I really messed up, huh," she says quietly. "Or, I'm really messed up."
  
He looks down at Mari. Even at her new height, he towers over her. "You really are sorry." The anger has fallen from his voice.  
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He looks down at Mari, even at her knew height he towers over her. "You really are sorry." The anger has fallen from his voice.  
  
 
"I guess I am," she nods sadly. "You're my mate, after all. I should be better to you.  There's... there's a lot of things I don't remember. Like, your name, and where we first met... if we were happy together. And stuff."
 
"I guess I am," she nods sadly. "You're my mate, after all. I should be better to you.  There's... there's a lot of things I don't remember. Like, your name, and where we first met... if we were happy together. And stuff."
  
"Then maybe we can work things out after all."  
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"Then maybe we can work things out after all." His image fades from view. Mari isn't able to see Shy, Seven, or Kraik until, she lifts her head. She sees them all laying on their backs in the pool.
 
 
His image fades from view. Mari isn't able to see Shy, Seven, or Kraik until, she lifts her head. She sees them all laying on their backs in the pool.
 
 
 
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'''Back in the Manse yet again...'''
 
  
 
"Wait. Now it's everyone's turn?" she asks. "Okay, does anyone have any idea what's going on or why I'm seeing all these things?"
 
"Wait. Now it's everyone's turn?" she asks. "Okay, does anyone have any idea what's going on or why I'm seeing all these things?"
  
She's not angry as she says this, just a mix of curious and... a little sad. She hurt someone in the past, and who knows how many others, besides. And the big boobie lady... she was her, but not her... and..."
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She's not angry as she says this, just a mix of curious and... a little sad. She hurt someone in the past, and who knows how many others, besides. And the big boobie lady... she was her, but not her... and...:"
  
 
"Nyarg, thinking about it makes me headache," she pouts.
 
"Nyarg, thinking about it makes me headache," she pouts.
  
"The past is irreversible," the voice comes from behind her and is that of one of the statues. "The ability to ask for forgiveness and seek personal atonement, though no such deed is required, requires strength untold. You lasted through it all. Hope that your companions can do the same. They have been unconscious longer than you."
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"The past is irreversable," the voice comes from behind her and is that of one of the statues. "The ability to ask for forgiveness and seek personal atonement though no such deed is required, requires strength untold. You lasted through it all. Hope that your companions can do the same. They have been unconcious longer than you."
  
"Whoa. So... that was the bad stuff I did? In my... past life? When I was me, but... not me? I don't think it was my fault. I mean, I didn't do it, not... me now. But... even so, I still feel sorry for them. What was his name? That... wolfy guy on the boat. I think he was my mate. Do you know?"
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"Whoa. So... that was the bad stuff I did? In my... past life? When I was me, but... not me? I don't think it was my fault. I mean, I didn't do it, not... me now. But... even so, I still feel sorry for them."
  
"We do not. The orb pulls the memories from the shard within you. If you had been mortal you would have died instantly. If you had been Exalted of anything but the Sun you would have died."
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"What was his name? That... wolfy guy on the boat. I think he was my mate. Do you know?"
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"We do not. The orb pulls the memories from the shard within you. If you had been mortal you would have died instantly. If yolu had been exalted of anything but the Sun you would have died."
  
 
"Really? Wow. Good thing it's me who picked it up, then... but how about the others?" she points to Seven, Kraik and Shy. "Are they... you know, dead?"
 
"Really? Wow. Good thing it's me who picked it up, then... but how about the others?" she points to Seven, Kraik and Shy. "Are they... you know, dead?"
  
Mari notices a crystal orb in each of their hands.  
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Mari notices a crystal orb in each of their hands. "Unknown at this time,"
 
 
"Unknown at this time," comes the reply.
 
  
 
"Uh oh." She remembers what the statue said about mortals and not being Solars. "Shy? Mr. Kraik?" she calls out., shaking their shoulders. "Guys? Guys?!"
 
"Uh oh." She remembers what the statue said about mortals and not being Solars. "Shy? Mr. Kraik?" she calls out., shaking their shoulders. "Guys? Guys?!"
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"If I finish the test, will they be all right?" Mari asks, indicating Kraik, Shy and Seven.
 
"If I finish the test, will they be all right?" Mari asks, indicating Kraik, Shy and Seven.
  
It says nothing and then the living statues both walk back to their pedestals and return to stone.
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It says nothing and then both walk back to their pedestals and turn back to stone.
  
 
"Don't I even get a hint as to... oh, fine! I'll do the silly test! Where is it, anyway?!"
 
"Don't I even get a hint as to... oh, fine! I'll do the silly test! Where is it, anyway?!"
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Mari shakes him until he finally comes to. He holds his head. "I've had the weirdest dream."
 
Mari shakes him until he finally comes to. He holds his head. "I've had the weirdest dream."
  
"Are you okay?" she asks, glomping him hard enough that his bones creak. "I was so worried!"
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"Are you okay?" she asks, glomping him hard enough that her bones creak. "I was so worried!"
  
"Erk." He pats her on the back. "Ya, I think so. What the hell is going on?"
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"Erk." He pats her on the back. "Ya, I think so. What the hell is going on?"
  
 
"I think... that was the second trial of the Manse. That that that statue thing mentioned that those orbs, if someone other than a Solar holds them, they die... can... can you help me check on the others? Please?"
 
"I think... that was the second trial of the Manse. That that that statue thing mentioned that those orbs, if someone other than a Solar holds them, they die... can... can you help me check on the others? Please?"
  
He gets up quickly and heads over to Kraik. He touches him at several points and then lays his hand on the mans chest. "His breathing and heart rate are slow. He appears alive for now."
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He gets up quickly and heads over to Kraik. He touches him at several poin ts and then lays his hand on the mans chest. "His breathing and heart rate are slow. He appears alive for now."
  
 
"Whew," Mari breathes. How about Shy?"
 
"Whew," Mari breathes. How about Shy?"
  
"He seems okay as well....for a demon."
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"He seems ok as well....for a demon."
  
 
"May I ask what you saw?" Mari asks quietly.
 
"May I ask what you saw?" Mari asks quietly.
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"As long as you're okay," she says quietly as she squeezes his hand.
 
"As long as you're okay," she says quietly as she squeezes his hand.
  
"I feel fine, but that might stick with me for a long time."  
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"I feel fine, but that might stick with me for a long time." He looks around. Hallways and rooms branch off in all directions. "So now what do these things want?"
  
He looks around. Hallways and rooms branch off in all directions. "So now what do these things want?"
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"THey said something about a test of mercy. I don;t know what that means, though... and they wouldn't tell me anything."
  
"They said something about a test of mercy. I don't know what that means, though... and they wouldn't tell me anything."
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"This just gets better and better." He stands up and looks around. "Maybe we should take a look around"
 
 
"This just gets better and better." He stands up and looks around. "Maybe we should take a look around..."
 
  
 
"Yeah, we should," Mari says as she takes his hand. "Come on, let's try this way," she says as she tugs him toward a random corridor.
 
"Yeah, we should," Mari says as she takes his hand. "Come on, let's try this way," she says as she tugs him toward a random corridor.
  
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They head down hallway and room after hallway and room. They finally reach what is obviously the hearthstone room. An egg sits upon a pedastal next to where the hearthstone lays. The sound of a mewling cat can be heard from one of the shadows.
 
 
'''The Test of Mercy'''
 
 
 
They head down hallway after hallways and room after room. At long last, they finally reach what is obviously the hearthroom. An egg sits upon a pedestal next to where the hearthstone lays. The sound of a mewling cat can be heard from one of the shadows.
 
  
 
"That must be the magic egg!" Mari exults as she spots the prize. But then, the sound of the cat gets her attention.
 
"That must be the magic egg!" Mari exults as she spots the prize. But then, the sound of the cat gets her attention.
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"Awww, poor kitty," she says, heading toward the sound.
 
"Awww, poor kitty," she says, heading toward the sound.
  
When she gets closer a part-man part-tiger creature leaps from the shadow. It doesn't attack her, but it does appear to be trying to frighten her away.
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When she gets closer a part man part tiger leaps from the shadow. It doesn't attack her but does appear to be trying to frighten her away.
  
 
"Waa!" Mari exclaims in surprise. However, it's not trying to eat her face off, so...  
 
"Waa!" Mari exclaims in surprise. However, it's not trying to eat her face off, so...  
  
"Hey, can you talk?" she smiles. She's willing to give it the benefit of the doubt so long as it doesn't try to maul her or Seven.
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"Hey, can you talk," she smiles. She's willing to give it the benefit of the doubt so long as it doesn't try to maul her or Seven.
  
It edges away from her and then snarls at one of the statue men that appears from around the corner. Its hands are clasped in front of him as he watches.  
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It edges away from her and then snarls at one of the statue men that appears from around the corner. The mans hands are clasped in front of him as he watches. "The Sun requires sacrifice in its name. Even the weak fuel his unconquerable inferno."
 
 
"The Sun requires sacrifice in its name. Even the weak fuel his unconquerable inferno."
 
  
 
"Sacrifice? What kind of sacrifice?"
 
"Sacrifice? What kind of sacrifice?"
  
"It has no tongue, it has been declawed. It was a failed experiment of the lover to this temple's former master. Its purpose is to be sacrificed to the sun. No greater mercy can be given to such a wretched creature of darkness."
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"It has no tongue, it has been declawed. It was a failed experiment of the lover to this temple's former master. It's purpose is to be sacrificed to the sun. No greater mercy can be given to such a wretched creature of darkness."
  
Seven throws his hands up, "No! We are not killing that poor creature. Not for an egg, for a dragon ot all the land of the Realm. Right, Mari?"  
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Seven throws his hands up, "NO! We are not killing that poor creature. Not for an egg, a dragon and all the land of the realm. Right Mari?" He looks from Mari to the statue to the creature and back. He has unconciously entered a defensive stance.
 
 
He looks from Mari to the statue to the creature and back. He has unconsciously entered a defensive stance.
 
  
 
Mari looks at the strange man-tiger. As she does, she remembers her wolfy mate, and what Wrath tried to tell her after they first met.
 
Mari looks at the strange man-tiger. As she does, she remembers her wolfy mate, and what Wrath tried to tell her after they first met.
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With the delicacy of a mother, she bends down to embrace him tightly.
 
With the delicacy of a mother, she bends down to embrace him tightly.
 
   
 
   
"How long have you been here by yourself?" she asks, though in all likelihood, he won't be able to answer.
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"How long have you been here, all alone? she asks, though in all likelihood, he won't be able to answer."
  
 
"It must have been lonely, huh?"
 
"It must have been lonely, huh?"
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She remembers the loneliness.
 
She remembers the loneliness.
  
It cries in her arms. Seven watches with concern, he know the strength in those arms. The statue watches impassively.
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It cries in her arms. Seven watches with concern, he know the strength in those arms. The stagtue watches impassively.
  
 
She squeezes him, one last time... and then rises to her feet.
 
She squeezes him, one last time... and then rises to her feet.
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"Right," she tells the statue. "I'll be the sacrifice, then. "Seven, no matter what, make sure this kid is never lonely again."
 
"Right," she tells the statue. "I'll be the sacrifice, then. "Seven, no matter what, make sure this kid is never lonely again."
  
The statue looks puzzled and then walks out of the room.  
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The statue looks puzzled and then walks out of the room. "Mari it isn't worth it. Not you not it."
 
 
"Mari it isn't worth it. Not you, not it."
 
  
 
"Well, then the alternative is that I leave with him. Because there's no way I'm going to sacrifice him, or anyone else, for this temple. Which is really nice, mind you, but like you said, it's not worth it. Not if I have to hurt him."
 
"Well, then the alternative is that I leave with him. Because there's no way I'm going to sacrifice him, or anyone else, for this temple. Which is really nice, mind you, but like you said, it's not worth it. Not if I have to hurt him."
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"Either way, you get your sacrifice, "Him, me... or this place."
 
"Either way, you get your sacrifice, "Him, me... or this place."
  
They hear footsteps coming down the hallway. They stutter, pause and then continue stutter stepping. Kraik and Shy appear from around the corner, bedraggled but alive.
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They hear footsteps coming down the hallway. They stutter, pause and then continue stutter stepping. Kraik and Shy appear from around the corner, bedraggled but alive.
 
    
 
    
 
"Mari!"
 
"Mari!"
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"Guys!" she exclaims, throwing herself at them.  "You're all right!" she sniffs, squishing them together in her relief.
 
"Guys!" she exclaims, throwing herself at them.  "You're all right!" she sniffs, squishing them together in her relief.
  
"Yes, we are. I'm not sure what all that was about but my nights will be fueled by nightmares in the future," Kraik says. Shy does not look up from the ground he is intently staring at.
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"Yes, we are. I'm not sure what all that was about but my nights will be fueled by nightmares in the future," kraik says. Shy does not look up from the ground he is intently staring at.
  
 
"Awww..."
 
"Awww..."
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Then she turns to the demon. "Hey..." she begins, reaching out a hand to him. "Will you be all right?" she asks.
 
Then she turns to the demon. "Hey..." she begins, reaching out a hand to him. "Will you be all right?" she asks.
  
"Yes mistress. It was... nothing." he looks around at the roomand then points at the egg. "Is that what you have been looking for?"
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"Yes mistress. It was...nothing." he looks around at the roomand then points at the egg. "Is that what you have been looking for?"
  
 
"I... think so. But the statue thing says I have to sacrifice someone for it. And... and I can't do that. Won't do that. I tried offering myself, but it refused to take me."
 
"I... think so. But the statue thing says I have to sacrifice someone for it. And... and I can't do that. Won't do that. I tried offering myself, but it refused to take me."
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"Yeah, it kind of sucks that we went through all of that for nothing. I'm sorry."
 
"Yeah, it kind of sucks that we went through all of that for nothing. I'm sorry."
  
"Are you certain it hasn't accepted Mari. It's a statue again. See," Seven points at the statue that went around the corner. "They did say it was a test of mercy. Maybe you passed."
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"Are you certain it hasn't accepted Mari. It's a statue again. See," Seven points at the statue that went around the corner. "He did say test of mercy. Maybe you passed."
  
 
"But... it wants a sacrifice, right? So... well... wow, I don't get it," she says, scratching her head. "This place is weird. I thought it woudl be like those dramas where the guy has to choose between his duty and his girl, and then they end up committing suicide together, or something."
 
"But... it wants a sacrifice, right? So... well... wow, I don't get it," she says, scratching her head. "This place is weird. I thought it woudl be like those dramas where the guy has to choose between his duty and his girl, and then they end up committing suicide together, or something."
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"I hate those."
 
"I hate those."
  
"None of the tests have been straightforward. The test pf strength and tenacity was not a physical contest. Purity only remotely had anything to do with sexuality. The Sun knows you would have failed that. Maybe it was meant to test your selfishness. Your desire for material gain over a creature's life. From our dreams I'm certain the old us would have ruthlessly murdered that creature."
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"None of the tests have been straight. Strength and tenacity was not a physical contest. Purity only remotely had anything to do with sexuality. The sun knows you would have failed that. Maybe it was meant to test yourselfishness. Your desire for goods over a creatures life. From our dreams I'm certain old us would have ruthlessly murdered that creature."
  
 
Mari shudders a little. There were... other memories, not just those of Five Moons'. Her hands, wrenching the heads off every member of a family of dozens,the collective soul of a Primordial, lashed down for sxecution. Chuckling to herself as she heard reports of hundreds killing themselves in her name, and feeling the Essence their devotion released through their deaths. She didn't live through all of them... but the memories now lie in the back of her head and she knows she can pick through them at any time.
 
Mari shudders a little. There were... other memories, not just those of Five Moons'. Her hands, wrenching the heads off every member of a family of dozens,the collective soul of a Primordial, lashed down for sxecution. Chuckling to herself as she heard reports of hundreds killing themselves in her name, and feeling the Essence their devotion released through their deaths. She didn't live through all of them... but the memories now lie in the back of her head and she knows she can pick through them at any time.
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They do not make for pleasant remembering.
 
They do not make for pleasant remembering.
  
"I... don't want to be the old me," she says quietly. "I'm not a bad person. I'm Mari," continues, her confidence growing.  
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"I... don't want to be the old me," she says quietly. "I'm not a bad person. I'm Mari," continues, her confidence growing. "And like it or not, this place is just going to have to live with it!"
 
 
"And like it or not, this place is just going to have to live with it!"
 
  
 
"I don't know if the manse or its statues will have a problem with it,but if they do I'll be here to back you up." Seven says.
 
"I don't know if the manse or its statues will have a problem with it,but if they do I'll be here to back you up." Seven says.
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"Thanks, everyone," she smiles. Then, she approaches the strange little beast-boy.
 
"Thanks, everyone," she smiles. Then, she approaches the strange little beast-boy.
  
"''You'' are coming with me," she grins. "Seven, the statue said he has no tongue and he's been declawed. Can you do anything about that for him?" Mari asks.
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"You, are coming with me," she grins. "Seven, the statue said he has no tongue and he's been declawed. Can you do anything about that for him?" Mari asks.
 
 
It shakes its head vigorously as she pulls him close. Seven quickly examines the tigerboy, and then looks to Mari.
 
 
 
"Something you should know. He's a she."
 
 
 
"What? Really? I couldn't tell..."
 
  
Her voice trails off as she studies the curious tigergirl. Behind her, a throat is cleared.
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It shakes its head vigorously as she pulls him close. "Mind if I take a look around mari," kraik asks.
 
 
"Mind if I take a look around, Mari?" Kraik asks.
 
  
 
"Go ahead... and what's wrong?" she asks the beastboy.  
 
"Go ahead... and what's wrong?" she asks the beastboy.  
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"Maybe I have to sit on it. And hatch it. And stuff," she thinks out loud.
 
"Maybe I have to sit on it. And hatch it. And stuff," she thinks out loud.
  
None of them say anything knowing better. When she picks up the egg, she instinctively knows where to touch and what to turn. The egg hisses and opens. Thousand year old air escapes, stagnant and dry. Inside is a shining golden hand.  
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None of them say anything knowing better. When she picks up the eggshe instinctively knows where to touch and what to turn. The egg hisses and opens. Thousand year old air escapes, stagnant and dry. Inside is a shining golden hand. "I guess it was somehow linked to you." Seven finally speaks up. "Her shard is in sync with it. I wonder who the otherf person linked to it is."
  
"I guess it was somehow linked to you." Seven finally speaks up. "Her shard is in sync with it. I wonder who the other person linked to it is."
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"Maybe it was Five Moons," Mari says. As she picks up the hollow hand, she feels like she should put it on. As she does so, she feels a buzz of energy run up her arm, through her shoulder, and into the rest of her body.  
  
"Maybe it was Five Moons," Mari says. As she picks up the hollow hand, she feels like she should put it on. As she does so, she feels a buzz of energy run up her arm, through her shoulder, and into the rest of her body.  
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"Hey, wh-what-" she begins, and then a floodgate of memory breaks open in her head. She falls too her knees, like she's drowning in the surge of understanding that's overcome her.
  
"Hey, wh-what-" she begins, and then a floodgate of memory breaks open in her head. She falls too her knees, like she's drowning in the understanding that's overcome her.
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Seven reaches out to her and is about to say something but she already has the glove on,
  
Seven reaches out to her and is about to say something but she already has the glove on. Her lips and mouth are moving, but she's not saying anything - either she doesn't have strength for it, or she doesn't have the words. Knowledge from Five Moons and her many past incarnations flows into her mind, like a swarm of flying books that flock around her in a storm of fluttering pages that eventually slot themselves neatly into the shelves of her mind.
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Her lips and mouth are moving, but she's not saying anything - either she doesn't have strength for it, or she doesn't have the words. Knowledge from Five Moons and her many past incarnations flows into her mind, like a swarm of flying books that flock around her in a storm of fluttering pages that eventually slot themselves neatly into the shelves of her mind.
  
 
She slowly opens her eyes, and blinks, looking to Seven, Kraik, Shy, and her new daughter.
 
She slowly opens her eyes, and blinks, looking to Seven, Kraik, Shy, and her new daughter.
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She turns her gloved hand over. A softly-pulsing ball of gentle white light rests in its palm. Even without the ability to see Essence, everyone knows that it's a sea of power with no shore, compressed into a sphere the size of a chicken egg.  
 
She turns her gloved hand over. A softly-pulsing ball of gentle white light rests in its palm. Even without the ability to see Essence, everyone knows that it's a sea of power with no shore, compressed into a sphere the size of a chicken egg.  
  
"Hopefully something useful for the Rec-... nevermind," Shy says as he looks at the others.
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"Hopefully something useful forb the Rec-... nevermind," shy says as helooks at the others.
  
 
"And... wow. I know this place now. I know how to use it. And this," she says, holding up her hand.  
 
"And... wow. I know this place now. I know how to use it. And this," she says, holding up her hand.  
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"What does it do?"
 
"What does it do?"
  
"This?" she asks, pointing to the golden hand. "Well, by itself, nothing," Mari says. "But... there's a thing I can do now, something that lets me... shape the Wyld, or the world, I think? And this glove thingy... it lets me do it faster. Better. And stuff. I think, if used right... it can do anything. Anything at all."
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"This?" she asks, pointing to the golden hand. "Well, by itself, nothing," Mari says. "But... there's a thing I can do now, something that lets me... shape the Wyld, I think that's what it's called? And this glove thingy... it lets me do it faster. Better. And stuff. I think, if used right... it can do anything. Anything at all."
  
"I'm not sure that kind of power should be anyone's Mari..." says Seven.
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"I'm not sure that kind of power should be anyones mari," says seven
  
 
The Essence of the world pulses as the ball of light in the glove's hand glows. Sparks of Essence flow in from all around her, accreting into tiny glittering constellations, merging into small shapes of pure white energy... and a shower of candy rains down onto the ground before her.
 
The Essence of the world pulses as the ball of light in the glove's hand glows. Sparks of Essence flow in from all around her, accreting into tiny glittering constellations, merging into small shapes of pure white energy... and a shower of candy rains down onto the ground before her.
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"Candy! It makes candy! It's the most awesome thing ever!" she grins.
 
"Candy! It makes candy! It's the most awesome thing ever!" she grins.
  
"Okay, maybe you're perfect for it" Seven says, as he pops a handful of candy into his mouth.
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"Ok maybe you're perfect for it" seven pops a handful of candy into his mouth
  
 
Mari idly considers the thought of creating a horde of baldies to beat up. But she knows, even as she thinks it, that her Charms and the glove will make it real if she so desires. If she chose, she could make a giant rampaging monster to trample stuff. Or she could fill the world with flowers and cuddly animals.
 
Mari idly considers the thought of creating a horde of baldies to beat up. But she knows, even as she thinks it, that her Charms and the glove will make it real if she so desires. If she chose, she could make a giant rampaging monster to trample stuff. Or she could fill the world with flowers and cuddly animals.
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She walks out of the Hearthroom, in the direction of the nearby guest chambers. As she steps out into the dim corridors, the lights come on overhead, as though in response to one who bears the Hearthstone.
 
She walks out of the Hearthroom, in the direction of the nearby guest chambers. As she steps out into the dim corridors, the lights come on overhead, as though in response to one who bears the Hearthstone.
  
"Neeeeat," she giggles, still fiddling with the stone.
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"Neeeeat," she giggles, still fiddling with the stone.
  
"I think the Manse accepts you," Shy says.
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"I think the manse accepts you."
  
 
"That's great! Hmm... I want to go explore a little bit, though. Let's see what we can find..."
 
"That's great! Hmm... I want to go explore a little bit, though. Let's see what we can find..."
 
And off she wanders, humming tunelessly as she explores the long-abandoned halls...
 

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