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Dworkin takes a cookie from a tray and idly dips it in his tea.
 
Dworkin takes a cookie from a tray and idly dips it in his tea.
  
"Furthermore, your creation will be ''Wild'' for a time, as Amber once was, as Avalon is now. Corwin attempts to calm it and it may take centuries. Your work will be unpredictable, wild, and perhaps even mad for a time. Those who assay it in the first years will bear a more powerful imprint than those who come after it's taming will, even as those of us who remember the youth of Amber or the Logrus do. Beware who you let walk this Mark.  There will be unexpected consequences
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"Furthermore, your creation will be ''Wild'' for a time, as Amber once was, as Avalon is now. Corwin attempts to calm it and it may take centuries. Your work will be unpredictable, wild, and perhaps even mad for a time. Those who assay it in the first years will bear a more powerful imprint than those who come after it's taming will, even as those of us who remember the youth of Amber or the Logrus do. Beware who you let walk this Mark.  There will be unexpected consequences"
 
 
Dworkin glances toward the small cluster of future lords of Mandalay.  "And if those lords are here at the creation, their mark will be vastly more powerful then any lord who comes later.  And lastly, Oberon and I shall assay your work of course.  It might be wise to offer the Mark to King Random as well."  
 
  
 
   
 
   
  
Adrian considers Dworkin's advice as he sipped his own tea.  
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Adrian considered Dworkin's advice as he sipped his own tea.  
  
Oberon strolled around Ygg to examine the preparations.  As he passed the collection of people gave way before the the dead king.  Oberon glanced briefly at them, recognizing a shock of yellow hair there and bearded face here.  A belligerent teddy bear in a Seville Road suit, nods acknowledgment, gaining the barest of nods from the Dead King.  Seeing those who will be the new Lords of this realm, he considers them.  Off a ways he sees the wolf-pack and nods to his son.  Seeing by them one he has not seen in many a long millennia, a tall green haired daughter who fled into the waters in her youth, never to return.  
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Oberon strolled around Ygg to examine the preparations.  As he passes a collection of people gave way before the the dead king.  Oberon glanced briefly at them, recognizing a shock of yellow hair there and bearded face here.  A belligerent teddy bear in a Seville Road suit, nods acknowledgment, gaining the barest of nods from the Dead King of Amber.  Seeing those who will be the new Lords of this realm, he considers them.  Off a ways he sees the wolf-pack and nods to his son.  Seeing by them one he has not seen in many a long millennia, a tall green haired daughter who fled into the waters in her youth, never to return.  
  
As he turns to the tree he sees a smiling tall thin pale man with loud hair leaning against Ygg the tree.  Smiling Oberon speaks softly to his friend, a chuckle in his voice. "Et tu, David?"  He shakes hands with his old traveling partner, remembering many songs sung together when his friend called himself Ziggy Stardust.
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As he turns to the tree he sees a smiling thin pale man with loud hair leaning against Ygg the tree.  Smiling Oberon speaks softly to him, a chuckle in his voice. "Et tu, David?"  He shakes hands with his old traveling partner, remembering many songs sung together when his friend called himself Ziggy Stardust.
  
 
"Thank you Dworkin, "Adrien says with a nod," I understand what you are saying but I think I want to proceed as planned. Everything that exists in Chaos is but temporary shape and form of the primordial stuff of chaos. None of it has any permanence. Only in the Shadows of Amber does anything exist that holds its own reality. Those are the stones that cry out to me. It needs to be here. From here it will effect the lands to either poles. I do not seek control, merely a chance to protect that which has no advocate."
 
"Thank you Dworkin, "Adrien says with a nod," I understand what you are saying but I think I want to proceed as planned. Everything that exists in Chaos is but temporary shape and form of the primordial stuff of chaos. None of it has any permanence. Only in the Shadows of Amber does anything exist that holds its own reality. Those are the stones that cry out to me. It needs to be here. From here it will effect the lands to either poles. I do not seek control, merely a chance to protect that which has no advocate."

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