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Marlamin was one such child. From his life as a smith's son, Marlamin was transported to the great city to study under his master Otian Silverkin in the ways of becoming a wizard of the Vahid.  
 
Marlamin was one such child. From his life as a smith's son, Marlamin was transported to the great city to study under his master Otian Silverkin in the ways of becoming a wizard of the Vahid.  
 
Marlamin was exceptionally talented, and his prodigious intelligence garnered respect from not only his peers, but even his superiors.  
 
Marlamin was exceptionally talented, and his prodigious intelligence garnered respect from not only his peers, but even his superiors.  
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As time wore on, and the Eshtoran government, seeking to maintain credibility in the wake of gaining independence from the Lattaneran Empire, began to put intense political pressure on influential clans and organizations that operated within their borders. What began as sanctions and tariff rate increases, soon blossomed to political hostilities on both sides. The Vahid became the chief contender against the government, as the wealth of the magical trades stayed primarily within the pockets of the mages, unlike the merchants guilds, who tended to be more ready to line the pockets of the political establishment.  
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As time wore on, and the Eshtoran government sought to maintain credibility in the wake of gaining independence from the Lattaneran Empire, began to put intense political pressure on influential clans and organizations that operated within their borders. What began as sanctions and tariff rate increases, soon blossomed to political hostilities on both sides. The Vahid became the chief contender against the government, as the wealth of the magical trades stayed primarily within the pockets of the mages, unlike the merchants guilds, who tended to be more ready to line the pockets of the political establishment.  
 
After several political battles and anti-wizard propaganda campaigns took place, followed by a number of anti-establishment propaganda campaigns right back, the government of Eshtorah labeled the Vahid as an insurrectionist group, and dismantled the society.  
 
After several political battles and anti-wizard propaganda campaigns took place, followed by a number of anti-establishment propaganda campaigns right back, the government of Eshtorah labeled the Vahid as an insurrectionist group, and dismantled the society.  
 
As a political exile, Marlamin and many of his fellows came to the last remaining bastion of Wizardkind, the shining city of Xyra.  
 
As a political exile, Marlamin and many of his fellows came to the last remaining bastion of Wizardkind, the shining city of Xyra.  

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