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This particular location was built into the cliff face, approachable only by a high, winding stairs that passed along a narrow, damp bridge behind a waterfall.  The tiny terrace was barely six yards across, carved from the cliff face so that it was sheltered from the sky.  A low screening hedge provided some safety from falling, but the chief decorative feature was a hanging screen of flowering creepers.  Tiny, pure white blossoms grew in clusters along the vines, creating a lace-like curtain that filtered the light of the setting sun.  The moist stone floor of the niche was covered in a fine patina of moss, but the curving wooden benches at the rear of the room were dry.
 
This particular location was built into the cliff face, approachable only by a high, winding stairs that passed along a narrow, damp bridge behind a waterfall.  The tiny terrace was barely six yards across, carved from the cliff face so that it was sheltered from the sky.  A low screening hedge provided some safety from falling, but the chief decorative feature was a hanging screen of flowering creepers.  Tiny, pure white blossoms grew in clusters along the vines, creating a lace-like curtain that filtered the light of the setting sun.  The moist stone floor of the niche was covered in a fine patina of moss, but the curving wooden benches at the rear of the room were dry.
  
Marta stood seated opposite her brother, [[Rivers Between Us]]. Nervously she twisted the hem of her blouse, where a thread had come loose.  She knew that if she continued to fidget with it, the hem would begin to unravel, but thinking about this made it easier for her to avoid looking her sibling in the eye.
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[[Marta]] stood seated opposite her brother, [[Rivers Between Us]]. Nervously she twisted the hem of her blouse, where a thread had come loose.  She knew that if she continued to fidget with it, the hem would begin to unravel, but thinking about this made it easier for her to avoid looking her sibling in the eye.
  
 
“Marta, I know how you must feel about this, but I know she wants to clean break from what she was before.  She has even sworn this to me.”  She could tell that he was trying to convince her, but she was afraid of even looking at him and seeing the force of his fervor.  “I swear to you...”
 
“Marta, I know how you must feel about this, but I know she wants to clean break from what she was before.  She has even sworn this to me.”  She could tell that he was trying to convince her, but she was afraid of even looking at him and seeing the force of his fervor.  “I swear to you...”

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