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Maximillion Archus


	Born into the noble Archus family Maximillion and his 2 older brothers were sheltered within the confines of their family's mansion till they 14, from which they were then allowed to explore outside the mansion under direct supervision. Once they became old enough their father Richard Archus, being a well known General in the Lattanis military, enlisted each of his boys into the military despite his wife Amelia Archus' wishes, he did not want his boys to grow up to be soft. His oldest brother Richard Archus II quickly rose in rank due to his father's reputation, followed closely by the middle brother Simon Archus. Maximillion however refused any promotions that were brought to him based on the reputation of his father. He insisted upon going to the front lines and earning his reputation through combat and valor in which he did well. Maximillion always proved his loyalty by doing as he asked and doing it well, earning himself many awards, however he still never quite made it to be an officer in the military like his brothers did but instead stayed as an upper enlisted.
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−	Born into the noble Archus family Maximillion and his 2 older brothers were sheltered within the confines of their family's mansion till they 14, from which they were then allowed to explore outside the mansion under direct supervision. Once they became old enough their father Richard Archus, being a well known General in the Lattanis military, enlisted each of his boys into the military despite his wife Amelia Archus' wishes, he did not want his boys to grow up to be soft. His oldest brother Richard Archus II quickly rose in rank due to his father's reputation, followed closely by the middle brother Simon Archus. Maximillion however refused any promotions that were brought to him based on the reputation of his father. He insisted upon going to the front lines and earning his reputation through combat and valor in which he did well. Maximillion always proved his loyalty by doing as he asked and doing it well, earning himself many awards, however he still never quite made it to be an officer in the military like his brothers did but instead stayed as an upper enlisted.	+	Maximillion Archus
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		+	Born into the noble Archus family Maximillion and his 2 older brothers were sheltered within the confines of their family's mansion till they 14, from which they were then allowed to explore outside the mansion under direct supervision. Once they became old enough their father Richard Archus, being a well known General in the Lattanis military, enlisted each of his boys into the military despite his wife Amelia Archus' wishes, he did not want his boys to grow up to be soft. His oldest brother Richard Archus II quickly rose in rank due to his father's reputation, followed closely by the middle brother Simon Archus. Maximillion however refused any promotions that were brought to him based on the reputation of his father. He insisted upon going to the front lines and earning his reputation through combat and valor in which he did well. Maximillion always proved his loyalty by doing as he asked and doing it well, earning himself many awards, however he still never quite made it to be an officer in the military like his brothers did but instead stayed as an upper enlisted.