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Invincible Sword Princess

All things have a cause, and bigger things have bigger causes. Solars trace their designs ultimately to prototypes designed by Autotochthon. There are many Solars who one might think of themselves as being invincible with a sword, and Invincible Sword Princess is the prototype from which all such Solars spring.
The plans for Invincible Sword Princess were found in a library unearthed by the periodic movements of Autotochthon. The discovery of such an early set of plans so near the invasion of Creation were taken as a great omen, and Invincible Sword Princess was assembled by the best technicians with great reverence. At her unveiling, a great speech was made before a gathering of Sodalites. The new Alchemical, not five minues from the vats, concluded that the speech was not good enough, so she stepped up to the podium and finished it herself. Its been like that pretty much ever since.
Invincible Sword Princess is possessed of an almost boundless energy. She has spent time reviewing everything from combat tactics of elite troops to bureaucratic processes. Frequently, she very loudly demands that some improvement be made. The Sodalites at large have taken to viewing her as an arrogant and pestering pain in the ass. The worst part of it all is, she's usually right.
ISP herself is amazed by it all. She's immensly talented, but she's young - she shouldn't be able to find so many flaws! How come no one's noticed them before! Still, she trains hard with her Assembly for the day when the Invasion of Creation will come. It is hoped that she will have a superior understanding of the Solars that will enable her to negoiate well with the Solar Deliberative. (oops.)

Invincible Sword Princess
Orichalchum Caste Alchemical
Str 4*
Transient Augmentation of Strength, Personal Gravity Manipulation Apparatus
Dex 6*
Sustained Augmentation of Dex, Transient Augmentation of Dex, Accelerated Response System (both)
Sta 2
Cha 4*
Transient Agumentation of Charisma
Man 2
App 3
Int 4*
Per 2*
Wits 4* (3 BP Spent)


Abilities
Melee 5 (Swords+3) (7 BP Spent)
Dodge 3
Perform 3
Bureucracy 3
Athletics 3
Martial Arts 2
Investigation 1
Thrown 1
Lore 1
Socialize 1 (Solars +1) (1 BP)
Occult 1
Stealth 1 (1 BP)

Vats 3
Artifact 4
Backing 2

Valor 4 (3 BP)
Conviction 3
Temperance 1
Compasion 2

Willpower 7
9 Health Levels

Artifacts: Daiklave, Hearthstone Bracers, Breastplate. (All Orichalchum). Strain Resistent Chasis Modification, Accelerated Response System, Sustained Augmentation of Charisma, Transient Augmentation of Perception, Parabolic Leap Overcharge Device

Essence 2
Personal Essence: 15 Total, 7 availible
Periphereal Essence: 28 Total, 15 Availble

(Power) Combat:
Daiklave Speed 24 Damage 12L Accuracy 18 Defense 16
Dodge 11
Soak 9L/8B

She's built as a starting character. You may wish to check my math.