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A booming sound filled the room, and all discussion stopped.  On the second floor of the machine shop, Mite Xu's office door had flown open.  Surumiru gasped, “The bear!”
 
A booming sound filled the room, and all discussion stopped.  On the second floor of the machine shop, Mite Xu's office door had flown open.  Surumiru gasped, “The bear!”
  
The amalgam stepped out onto the catwalk, his wild eyes surveying the room like a hunter overlooking a herd of gazelle.  He had an immense mane of thick black hair, merging with a bushy beard with streaks of gray.  Tall and thick as an oak tree, his bare forearms were covered in black hair as thick as boar bristles.  As he stepped out in his thick leather overalls, he reached up beside the door for his tool: a wrench four feet long with a shaft that was as thick as a strong man's calf.
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The amalgam stepped out onto the catwalk, his wild eyes surveying the room like a hunter overlooking a herd of gazelle.  He had an immense mane of thick black hair, merging with a bushy beard with streaks of gray.  Tall and thick as an oak tree, his bare forearms were covered in the thick black hair as thick as boar bristles.  As he stepped out in his thick leather overalls, he reached up beside the door for his tool: a wrench four feet long with a shaft that was as thick as a strong man's calf.
  
 
He paused at the edge of the catwalk and bellowed, “Hysteria is for bureaucrats and new fathers, not the august ministry of public works!  Direct all of your efforts to repairing the second stage pump house.  Go!”
 
He paused at the edge of the catwalk and bellowed, “Hysteria is for bureaucrats and new fathers, not the august ministry of public works!  Direct all of your efforts to repairing the second stage pump house.  Go!”

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