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*'''Hair: '''Long, grey and straight, tied in a plait
 
*'''Hair: '''Long, grey and straight, tied in a plait
 
*'''Eyes: '''Light Grey
 
*'''Eyes: '''Light Grey
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*'''Skin:''' Very pale
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*'''Skin: Very pale:'''
 
*'''History and Personality'''
 
*'''History and Personality'''
 
Over twenty years of fighting has left its mark on Murglen, and the hale young man he was is unrecognisable today. Seven years ago he took a great stroke from an axe, sundering his helmet and smashing his face. As he crawled away, sobbing in pain, he was pinned to the ground by a finishing stroke. He should have died there and then, and has on more than one occasion since wished he had, but fate left him alive and ruined. It took almost a year to recover, but recover he did.
 
Over twenty years of fighting has left its mark on Murglen, and the hale young man he was is unrecognisable today. Seven years ago he took a great stroke from an axe, sundering his helmet and smashing his face. As he crawled away, sobbing in pain, he was pinned to the ground by a finishing stroke. He should have died there and then, and has on more than one occasion since wished he had, but fate left him alive and ruined. It took almost a year to recover, but recover he did.

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