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The red moon rises to the north-west and the late evening crew take a sight. The moos, small and far off, leaves a track in the water like a trail of blood.
 
The red moon rises to the north-west and the late evening crew take a sight. The moos, small and far off, leaves a track in the water like a trail of blood.
  
Suddenly the lookout shouts "There's a green light in the water! About two points off the port bow, a mile out."
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Suddenly the lookout shouts "There's a green light in the water! About two points of the port bow, a mile out."
  
 
Gatrenus clambers out of his hammock and pulls on his armour. Making sure he has all his weapons and foci with him he makes his way onto the deck. "Do pirates usually come with lights? I would have thought sneaking up unnoticed would have been a better plan."
 
Gatrenus clambers out of his hammock and pulls on his armour. Making sure he has all his weapons and foci with him he makes his way onto the deck. "Do pirates usually come with lights? I would have thought sneaking up unnoticed would have been a better plan."

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