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''Open Skies Above stepped around the edge of the cavern mouth, ducking to avoid the glistening drops of spray from the waterfall that filled the cavern entrance.  She smoothed her crimson hair back from her shoulders and tightened her Shroud of Heaven's Glory nervously.  The newest Night Caste in creation was a creature of beauty, delicate in frame and manner, with strangely vulnerable eyes.  She was dressed not for stealth or combat that day.  A kimono of deep violet silk, embroidered with black whorls along the seams, was her only adornment beyond the shroud.  She entered the cave on bare feet and waded through the knee deep pool to where they waited.''
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''Open Skies Above stepped around the edge of the cavern mouth, ducking to avoid the glistening drops of spray from the waterfall that filled the cavern entrance.  She smoothed her crimson hair back from her shoulders and tightened her Shroud of Heaven's Glory nervously.  The newest Night Caste is creation was a creature of beauty, delicate in frame and manner, with strangely vulnerable eyes.  She was dressed not for stealth or combat that day.  A kimono of deep violet silk, embroidered with black whorls along the seams, was her only adornment beyond the shroud.  She entered the cave on bare feet and waded through the knee deep pool to where they waited.''
  
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''[[Rivers Between Us]] wore a black silk kimono trimmed with mazes of purple embroidery.  On his brow he wore a wreath of laurel.  Beside him stood Chi Wen, the long, green blades of her hair pulled back and knotted behind her head and the simple civil robes on her shoulders.''
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''[[Rivers Between Us]] wore a black silk kimono trimmed with mazes of purple embroidery.  On his brow he wore a wreath of laurel.  Beside him stood Chi Wen, the long, green blades of her hair pulled back and knotted behind her head, and a the simple civil robes on her shoulders.''
  
 
''Rivers looked out through the curtain of water at the sun, nearly disappearing in the western sea.  He smiled and said, "You're late."''
 
''Rivers looked out through the curtain of water at the sun, nearly disappearing in the western sea.  He smiled and said, "You're late."''

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