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==Part 1: Celeren==
 
==Part 1: Celeren==
  
Suequmann the Sunrise Destroying Hammer stepped onto the beach.  His head lolled to one side, resting almost lovingly on the fist-thick links of the iron chain draped over his shoulder.  The seas foamed and howled behind him, still raging at the memory of his presence, unwilling to be reminded of its eons-forsaken ally.  With each step the ancient demon heaved on the chain, which behind him branched into dozens of chains.  Suequmann’s neck had bent at that angle ever since it had been shattered by Appointed Blasphemy, swung by Eottra Dyclasm in the Paling Wars at the edge of Dazraban.  Behind his grizzled visage, his long white tail twisted in undulous arcs through the many chains that trailed back to a smouldering fleet.  Each step he took tore great gouges in the sand of the seashore, bringing him only a few inches farther inland, but with each step he took, three dozen mastless ships were drawn a few inches closer to shore.
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Suequmann the Sunrise Destroying Hammer stepped onto the beach.  His head lolled to one side, resting almost lovingly on the fist-thick links of the iron chain draped over his shoulder.  The seas foamed and howled behind him, still raging at the memory of his presence, unwilling to be reminded of its ancient ally.  With each step the ancient demon heaved on the chain, which behind him branched into dozens of chains.  Suequmann’s neck had bent at that angle ever since it had been shattered by Appointed Blasphemy, swung by Eottra Dyclasm in the Paling Wars at the edge of Dazraban.  Behind his grizzled visage, his long white tail twisted in undulous arcs through the many chains that branched from the single arc of links that wrapped over his shoulder.  Each step he took tore great gouges in the sand of the seashore, bringing him only a few inches farther inland, but with each step he took, three dozen mastless were drawn a few inches closer to shore.
  
 
At the side of his general, Ledaal Kebok Omeger watched approvingly, confident that his bargain had been well made.  The Vermilion Legion had arrived in the Marukan.
 
At the side of his general, Ledaal Kebok Omeger watched approvingly, confident that his bargain had been well made.  The Vermilion Legion had arrived in the Marukan.

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