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''“I’ll summarize. It is a ‘be on the lookout’ notice sent to all PDF vessels. It says that he broke into PDF command on Highgate, may have gotten some information, or tampered with files there, was captured, and escaped. Quite a busy trip,”'' she went on to tell me.  And followed it with, ''“Carter is a bit of a pariah now. Our information network was dealt a pretty serious blow when his intel got leaked. That said, I know how it happened. So I hold no grudge. But it is hard to blame those who lost friends and compatriots, and maybe those that don’t know how it happened. Carter was often in so deep lots of people were never sure whose side he was on. Does that make sense? This just cemented the view that maybe he wasn't one of them, one of us.”''
 
''“I’ll summarize. It is a ‘be on the lookout’ notice sent to all PDF vessels. It says that he broke into PDF command on Highgate, may have gotten some information, or tampered with files there, was captured, and escaped. Quite a busy trip,”'' she went on to tell me.  And followed it with, ''“Carter is a bit of a pariah now. Our information network was dealt a pretty serious blow when his intel got leaked. That said, I know how it happened. So I hold no grudge. But it is hard to blame those who lost friends and compatriots, and maybe those that don’t know how it happened. Carter was often in so deep lots of people were never sure whose side he was on. Does that make sense? This just cemented the view that maybe he wasn't one of them, one of us.”''
  
She’d had a data pad with the report of his capture and escape on it.  The date on it was forty-five days old.  A lot could happen in a month and a half.  Shyla hadn’t finished hitting me with the bombshells.  She’d lobbed another in my lap with, ''“And... there is something else. His name came up recently. But not in the context of the PDF. I was speaking with Ge You. He asked if I had heard of him. I was vague, mentioned what we all know… and You said something odd. ‘A man like that is probably in need of a friend wouldn't you think?’ I don’t remember what I said. We moved on to other business. When I left the meeting he asked me to keep an eye out for Carter and let him, You, know if he showed up. I thought that very odd.”''
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She’d had a data pad with the report of his capture and escape on it.  The date on it was forty-five days old.  A lot could happen in a month and a half.  Shyla hadn’t been through hitting me with the bombshells.  She’d lobbed another in my lap with, ''“And... there is something else. His name came up recently. But not in the context of the PDF. I was speaking with Ge You. He asked if I had heard of him. I was vague, mentioned what we all know… and You said something odd. ‘A man like that is probably in need of a friend wouldn't you think?’ I don’t remember what I said. We moved on to other business. When I left the meeting he asked me to keep an eye out for Carter and let him, You, know if he showed up. I thought that very odd.”''
  
 
''“When was this conversation with You? Before or after the Highgate job?”'' I’d asked.
 
''“When was this conversation with You? Before or after the Highgate job?”'' I’d asked.

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