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<span style="color:#800000">'''''Took me forever to nail this one. RL sucks.--Maer'''''</span><br><br>
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<span style="color:#800000">'''''Took me forever to nail this one. RL sucks.--Maer'''''</span><br> <br> <br><br>
  
  
''From Irina DiSanti’s journal''<br><br>
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''From Irina DiSanti’s journal''<br><br><br>
  
 
'''Saturday, 06 Aug 2011'''<br>
 
'''Saturday, 06 Aug 2011'''<br>
'''Devereaux-Shields House B&B'''<br>
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'''Devereaux-Shields House B&B''''<br>
'''Natchez MS'''<br>
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'''Natchez MS''<br>
'''1330hrs, local time'''<br><br>
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'''1330hrs, local time'''<br><br><br>
  
  
 
I found a note under my door. I opened it and read:<br><br>
 
I found a note under my door. I opened it and read:<br><br>
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''Irina,''<br><br>  
 
''Irina,''<br><br>  
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I’d woken from a deep sleep, confused and blinking at the comforter that lay over my face. ''The hell—?'' I clawed it off me and found myself on top of the sheets fully clothed save for my boots and my gun. I took a deep breath and caught the stink of vomit, looked down and saw my shirt had caught a dribble of it.<br><br>  
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I’d woken from a deep sleep, confused and blinking at the comforter that had been pulled over my face. The hell—? I clawed it off me and found I’d lain on top of the sheets fully clothed save for my boots and my gun. I took a deep breath and caught the stink of vomit, looked down and saw my shirt had caught a dribble of it.<br><br>  
  
 
''Ice picks stabbing through my head to the strains of badly-sung karaoke ... asphalt under my hands as I lost my dinner to the parking lot … clawing my  phone from my pocket and thrusting it at Renny as he drove me back to the B&B … losing consciousness as he carried me up the stairs …''<br><br>
 
''Ice picks stabbing through my head to the strains of badly-sung karaoke ... asphalt under my hands as I lost my dinner to the parking lot … clawing my  phone from my pocket and thrusting it at Renny as he drove me back to the B&B … losing consciousness as he carried me up the stairs …''<br><br>
  
The light slanting through my windows told me it was past noon. I checked my watch. ''1330 hours''. I’d slept ten hours straight.<br><br>  
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The light slanting through my windows told me it was past noon. I checked my watch. 1330 hours. I’d slept ten hours straight.<br><br>  
  
 
''Easy, DiSanti. Baby steps''.<br><br>
 
''Easy, DiSanti. Baby steps''.<br><br>
  
I knew the drill. I gave myself a moment before daring to sit up.  The world spun and I lay back down. I closed my eyes to let things settle, then checked my watch. ''1345''. My head behaved itself when I sat up and the floor remained still when I stood up.  My bathroom had a window and the light bouncing off the tiles and the fixtures was painful, but no more than any other morning before I washed the sleep off my face. I flipped the medicine cabinet open, pulled the Advil off the shelf, and swallowed two of the pills dry.  Water from the tap followed, one slow sip at a time. The world steadied some more and my body resigned itself to staying upright. I stared at myself in the mirror.<br><br>  
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I knew the drill. I gave myself a moment before daring to sit up.  The world spun and I lay back down. I closed my eyes to let things settle, then checked my watch. 1345. My head behaved itself when I sat up and the floor remained still when I stood up.  My bathroom had a window and the light bouncing off the tiles and the fixtures was painful, but no more than any other morning before I washed the sleep off my face. I flipped the medicine cabinet open, pulled the Advil off the shelf, and swallowed two of the pills dry.  Water from the tap followed, one slow sip at a time. The world steadied some more and my body resigned itself to staying upright. I stared at myself in the mirror.<br><br>  
  
 
''Not too bad. Been better''.<br><br>  
 
''Not too bad. Been better''.<br><br>  

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