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The second of these is the late [[Chokhan Fifteenth Son Shatters the River]], an Immaculate monk who purchased the estate following an illicit affair with an ostensibly Marukani woman known as Erdene. Chokhan brought great wisdom, teachings, and discipline to the workers at the estate. Chokhan also applied the Immaculate tenets of Spirit Veneration to the Nameless God, and rightly deduced the God's wish to be left undisturbed. Once the workers stopped worshipping the Nameless God, the estate's crafty monkeys were free to harvest tea from the deepest depths of the ravine, improving the estate's yields many-fold. Chokhan's influence gives the tea a foundation of straightforward excellence. | The second of these is the late [[Chokhan Fifteenth Son Shatters the River]], an Immaculate monk who purchased the estate following an illicit affair with an ostensibly Marukani woman known as Erdene. Chokhan brought great wisdom, teachings, and discipline to the workers at the estate. Chokhan also applied the Immaculate tenets of Spirit Veneration to the Nameless God, and rightly deduced the God's wish to be left undisturbed. Once the workers stopped worshipping the Nameless God, the estate's crafty monkeys were free to harvest tea from the deepest depths of the ravine, improving the estate's yields many-fold. Chokhan's influence gives the tea a foundation of straightforward excellence. | ||
β | The third of these is [[Erdene]], the woman whom so captivated Chokhan that he broke his vows of celibacy. I cannot tell what qualities she brings to the tea, because she vanishes from the history shortly after the birth of her son, the boy named Nameless Ravine. I suspect she may well have been a spirit in human form, or a God-Blood, a Dragon-blood, or even, a fellow Siderial. The latter is the most troubling possibility. Her involvement gives the tea | + | The third of these is [[Erdene]], the woman whom so captivated Chokhan that he broke his vows of celibacy. I cannot tell what qualities she brings to the tea, because she vanishes from the history shortly after the birth of her son, the boy named Nameless Ravine. I suspect she may well have been a spirit in human form, or a God-Blood, a Dragon-blood, or even, a fellow Siderial. The latter is the most troubling possibility. Her involvement gives the tea |
The fourth of these is, of course, [[Nameless Ravine]] himself. His presence, his history, and his passions loom large over the tea. In the years to come, he could bring the tea to new heights of excellence... or he could doom it to fire and destruction. | The fourth of these is, of course, [[Nameless Ravine]] himself. His presence, his history, and his passions loom large over the tea. In the years to come, he could bring the tea to new heights of excellence... or he could doom it to fire and destruction. |