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The exalt shook his head, smiling.  "Now it's my turn to ask you to speak plainly."   
 
The exalt shook his head, smiling.  "Now it's my turn to ask you to speak plainly."   
  
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The Sage leaned against the low pavilion wall.  "People will never love you for putting yourself above them; soldiers will never cheer you if they can't understand the danger you face on their behalf.  Lead them forward, keep them organized, so that when you fight their foes they'll have wits enough to see the work you do."
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The Sage leaned against the low pavilion wall.  "People will never love you for putting yourself above them; soldiers will never cheer you if they can't understand the danger the danger you face on their behalf.  Lead them forward, keep them organized, so that when you fight their foes they'll have wits enough to see the work you do."
  
 
Ishi frowned.  "That's a cynical attitude.  I'm sorry to say it, but you've a vain view of heroism."
 
Ishi frowned.  "That's a cynical attitude.  I'm sorry to say it, but you've a vain view of heroism."

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