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The deepest depths of night found him perhaps two hours’ ride away from White Bluff, which was visible on the horizon as a smudge looming above the plains.  “Perhaps [[Sha Yan Shi]] found her way back to the abandoned town,” he thought.  Nameless Ravine was about to turn towards the village, when a windchime sounded in his ear.  He snapped his armor’s visor down over his head, and watched as the armor’s sensor matrix illuminated a small shadowland straight ahead.  “That’s odd,” he thought, “this wasn’t here two days ago.”
 
The deepest depths of night found him perhaps two hours’ ride away from White Bluff, which was visible on the horizon as a smudge looming above the plains.  “Perhaps [[Sha Yan Shi]] found her way back to the abandoned town,” he thought.  Nameless Ravine was about to turn towards the village, when a windchime sounded in his ear.  He snapped his armor’s visor down over his head, and watched as the armor’s sensor matrix illuminated a small shadowland straight ahead.  “That’s odd,” he thought, “this wasn’t here two days ago.”
  
Another windchime sounded, repeated, insistent; he dropped the armor’s ethereal shroud and refocused the energy into the Awareness Array, and the night illuminated bright as day to his eyes.  “There she is, right in the center of that hell-hole.  Poor thing, she’s stuck until morning.”
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Another windchime sounded, repeated, insistent; he dropped the armor’s ethereal shroud and refocused the energy into the Awareness Array, and the night illuminated bright as day to his eyes.  “There she is, right in the center of that hell-hold.  Poor thing, she’s stuck until morning.”
  
 
Nameless Ravine dismounted at the threshold where no-man’s-land ended and darkness began.  “Go,” he told his steed; “Fly to [[Hiparkes]]; a shadowland is no place for you.”  The horse turned and galloped away, and the solar plunged into the heart of darkness.
 
Nameless Ravine dismounted at the threshold where no-man’s-land ended and darkness began.  “Go,” he told his steed; “Fly to [[Hiparkes]]; a shadowland is no place for you.”  The horse turned and galloped away, and the solar plunged into the heart of darkness.

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