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Five scales of men stood in a fivefold circular formation as the officer corps of the Yamabushi Corps gathered around the Talon’s standard-bearer and listened to the briefing.  Chi Wen stood at the forefront as [[Nameless Ravine]] and, [[Sapphire River at Midnight]] relayed the battle plans.  Lu Fei was there as well.  She quietly walked up to them and peered over the Amalgamated Herald’s shoulder and watched Ravine gesture to a map spread out on the ground before him.
 
Five scales of men stood in a fivefold circular formation as the officer corps of the Yamabushi Corps gathered around the Talon’s standard-bearer and listened to the briefing.  Chi Wen stood at the forefront as [[Nameless Ravine]] and, [[Sapphire River at Midnight]] relayed the battle plans.  Lu Fei was there as well.  She quietly walked up to them and peered over the Amalgamated Herald’s shoulder and watched Ravine gesture to a map spread out on the ground before him.
  
“…only the third and fourth Talons from Second Wing will be going to [[Varsi]], under Choshu Ishi’s command.  The remainder of Second Wing will stay here with Sweet Voice of Brass and Glory to serve as the backbone of the main relief force; she will rally the Marukan to us, and you will be the shock troops.  We’re not sure whether you’ll be marching to [[Celeren]] or to Varsi; that will depend on what the advance elements find.  Furthermore…” Nameless Ravine stopped in his tracks.  “…Shai Mei, what are you doing here?”  All eyes were on her.  Sapphire River scowled, and Chi Wen shrugged.  Lu Fei merely raised an eyebrow.
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“…only the third and fourth Talons from Second Wing will be going to [[Varsi]], under Choshu Ishi’s command.  The remainder of Second Wing will stay here with Sweet Voice of Brass and Glory to serve as the backbone of the main relief force; will rally the Marukan to us, and you will be the shock troops.  We’re not sure whether you’ll be marching to [[Celeren]] or to Varsi; that will depend on what the advance elements find.  Furthermore…” Nameless Ravine stopped in his tracks.  “…Shai Mei, what are *you* doing here?”  All eyes were on her.  Sapphire River was scowled, and Chi Wen shrugged.  Lu Fei merely raised an eyebrow.
  
 
“Reporting for duty, your solarness.”  An amused titter ran through the ranks at this remark.
 
“Reporting for duty, your solarness.”  An amused titter ran through the ranks at this remark.

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