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Mahzz spent a full month in the city, resorting to stealth and thievery to survive, keeping his other abilities out of sight. He still could not control his powers enough to prevent draining energy from the environment around him. The elder had been trying to teach him how to preserve the life forces, but the lectures had not sunken in. Rumors of new participants of the arena depicting the marks of the raiders had coerced Mahzz to allow himself to get caught stealing. He put up a fight, hoping to convince the guards to toss him in the arena. He used a dagger he filched, and managed to slash one of the guards ears. The guard backpeddled, ear useless, dazed from the attack. The other guard threw a sack over Mahzz's head, but not before taking a few cuts himself. They knocked Mahzz out, tossed him in chains, and started to haul him off. A passing merchant noted the feisty, combative thief and suggested letting him get it beat out of him in the arena. The guards looked at each other, and took the bagged miscreant to the arena.
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Mahzz spent a full month in the city, resorting to stealth and thievery to survive, keeping his other abilities out of sight. He still could not control his powers enough to prevent draining energy from the environment around him. The elder had been trying to teach him how to preserve the life forces, but the lectures had not sunken in. Rumors of new participants of the arena depicting the marks of the raiders had coerced Mahzz to allow himself to get caught stealing. He put up a fight, hoping to convince the guard to toss him in the arena. He used a dagger he filched, and managed to stab one of the guards in the ear. The guard fell, ear useless, dazed from the attack. The other guard threw a sack over Mahzz's head, knocked him out, tossed him in chains, and hauled him to the arena. A passing noble noted the fiesty thief, and suggested letting him get it beat out of him in the arena.
  
Mahzz was tossed in a cell along with several other unsavory looking characters. His sack is still tied over his head, cursing in elven, muffled by the bag, wondering why he thought that was a good idea.
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Mahzz was tossed in a cell along with several other unsavory looking characters. His sack is still tied over his head.
 
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