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| − | <i>Eclipse Caste ex-pirate gunslinger diplomat</i> | + | <i>Eclipse Caste pirate diplomat</i> |
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| − | ''A young man stands proudly at the bow of the 'Stormdriven' clad in ornate royal blue and gold brocade. From under his tricorn hat, which he is rarely seen without, his long black hair falls over his shoulders in an artful mess. Blue eyes shine with alarming intensity from his sunburnt face, a challenge to anyone who would doubt his authority on this ship or otherwise. In unobserved moments there sometimes is a haunted expression in them, but with smooth certainty Cloud deflects any and all questions. Those who approach him with respect, be it as friend or foe, are treated in kind and find in him an honorable man, whose word is solid and whose friendship will last. On the other hand those who are disrespectful quickly find themselves staring into the long barrel of the revolver he always keeps at his side. It's only in dealings with the Dead that Cloud's composure shows cracks. A hateful light comes into his eyes and his language becomes terse. In moments of stress his right hand may even unconsciously stray towards his gun.'' | + | ''Description and first impression goes here'' |
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| | ==Anima== | | ==Anima== |
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| | ==Intimacies== | | ==Intimacies== |
| − | ''My ship and my crew are mine to command and mine to protect.''<br> | + | ''My ship and my crew are mine to command and mine to preserve''<br> |
| − | ''My word is as solid and permanent as jade, but pay attention to the small print.''<br> | + | ''My word is as solid and permanent as jade, but pay attention to the small print''<br> |
| | ''Deceit and destruction is all the forces of Death know. Never let your guard down!'' | | ''Deceit and destruction is all the forces of Death know. Never let your guard down!'' |
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| | ===Caste Abilities=== | | ===Caste Abilities=== |
| − | Bureaucrazy 3, Linguistics 1 (<i>Riverspeak</i>, Low Realm), Sail 4 (Reckless maneuvers +2), Socialize 3 | + | Bureaucrazy 3, Linguistics 1 (<i>Riverspeak</i>, ???), Sail 4 (Reckless maneuvers +2), Socialize 3 |
| | ===Favored Abilities=== | | ===Favored Abilities=== |
| − | Archery 5 (Gunslinger +3), Presence 5 (Trust me +3), Performance 4 (Respect mah authority! +1), Dodge 5 (In armor +3), Integrity 2 | + | Archery 5 (Guns +3), Presence 5 (Trust me +3), Performance 4 (??? +1), Dodge 5 (In armor +3), Integrity 2 |
| | ===Unfavored Abilities=== | | ===Unfavored Abilities=== |
| | Martial Arts 2, Resistance 2, Lore 1, Athletics 3, Awareness 4, Larceny 2 | | Martial Arts 2, Resistance 2, Lore 1, Athletics 3, Awareness 4, Larceny 2 |
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| | ===Archery=== | | ===Archery=== |
| | First Archery Excellency<br> | | First Archery Excellency<br> |
| − | Essence Arrow Attack ''(2m, Add Ess to damage)''<br> | + | Essence Arrow Attack (Fiery Arrow, Dazzling Flare, Righteous Judgement)<br> |
| − | *Fiery Arrow ''(Set things on fire)''
| + | Phantom Arrow Technique<br> |
| − | *Dazzling Flare ''(Do Holy Damage against Creatures of Darkness)''
| + | There Is No Wind<br> |
| − | *Righteous Judgement ''(+1m, add 4 dice to damage)''
| + | Trance of Unhesitating Speed |
| − | Phantom Arrow Technique ''(1m, create an arrow from essence)''<br> | |
| − | There Is No Wind ''(3m, ignore all penalties except wound and multiple action, +2m, increase range to visibility)''<br> | |
| − | Trance of Unhesitating Speed ''(2m/attack, max Ess+1 attacks at full pool)'' | |
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| | ===Dodge=== | | ===Dodge=== |
| | Shadow Over Water ''(1m, dodge at full DV)''<br> | | Shadow Over Water ''(1m, dodge at full DV)''<br> |
| − | Reflex Sidestep Technique ''(1m, use full defense against unexpected attacks)'' | + | Reflex Sidestep Technique ''(1m, full defense against unexpected attacks)'' |
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| | ===Sail=== | | ===Sail=== |
| | First Sail Excellency<br> | | First Sail Excellency<br> |
| − | Salty Dog Method ''(3m, remove up to Ess external penalties, including DVs, in a naval context)''<br> | + | Salty Dog Method<br> |
| − | Sea Ambush Technique ''(10m, 1wp, double successes for naval stealth and surprise actions)'' | + | Sea Ambush Technique |
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| | ===Presence=== | | ===Presence=== |
| | First Presence Excellency<br> | | First Presence Excellency<br> |
| − | Majestic Radiant Presence ''(7m, opponents have to either spend 3wp or make a valor roll for every attack on the character)''<br> | + | Majestic Radiant Presence<br> |
| − | Terrifying Apparition of Glory ''(3m, render Dodge MDV inapplicable. Costs only 2m if MRP is active)'' | + | Terrifying Apparition of Glory |
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| | ===Performance=== | | ===Performance=== |
| | First Performance Excellency<br> | | First Performance Excellency<br> |
| − | Heart-Compelling Method ''(6m, a successful social attack to incite an emotion costs 2wp to resist)'' | + | Heart-Compelling Method |
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| − | ===Linguistics===
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| − | Sagacious Reading of Intent ''(3m, identify the exact motivation behind a given statement, perfectly defend against social influence with hostile intentions)''
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| | ==Essence== | | ==Essence== |
| | Essence: 3<br> | | Essence: 3<br> |
| | Peripheral: 39/39<br> | | Peripheral: 39/39<br> |
| − | Personal: 7/16<br> | + | Personal: 16/16<br> |
| | Committed: None<br> | | Committed: None<br> |
| | Anima Status: None | | Anima Status: None |
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| | ==Willpower== | | ==Willpower== |
| − | OOOOO OO (Willpower 6/7) | + | OOOOO OO (Willpower 7/7) |
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| | ==Virtues== | | ==Virtues== |
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| | ===Limit Break=== | | ===Limit Break=== |
| − | <b>Explosive Anger</b><br> | + | <b>LIMIT BREAK GOES HERE</b><br> |
| − | ''Silver Cloud is struck by a dark mood and his anger flares uncontrollably. At these times even the slightest provocation, real or imagined, is enough to send him into fits of irrational fury. Shouting tantrums, property damage and duels to the death usually ensue wherever he goes. Even against the best friends and most benevolent of allies he'll lash out with cruel insults.''<br>
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| − | Limit Condition: When Cloud is insulted, slighted or treated with condescension.<br> | + | Limit Condition: |
| | Limit: <b></b> | | Limit: <b></b> |
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| | ==Combat & Equipment== | | ==Combat & Equipment== |
| | Soak: 7L/10B (Exceptional Lamellar Armor), HL: -0, -1, -1, -2, -2, -4, Incap<br> | | Soak: 7L/10B (Exceptional Lamellar Armor), HL: -0, -1, -1, -2, -2, -4, Incap<br> |
| − | DDV: 8, Join Battle: 7 (11 with Sudden Thunder), | + | DDV: 8, Join Battle: 7, |
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| | Unarmed punch: Spd 5, Acc 7, Dmg 2B, PDV 3, Rate 3<br> | | Unarmed punch: Spd 5, Acc 7, Dmg 2B, PDV 3, Rate 3<br> |
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| | ===Artifact 4 - Sudden Thunder=== | | ===Artifact 4 - Sudden Thunder=== |
| | Ever since he took a pair of firewands from the pirate captain he mutineered against Cloud has taken on the aspect of the storm cloud, throwing thunder and lightning at his enemies. However it wasn't until the Bureau of Endings approached him that he gained access to a weapon fit to be wielded by one of Sol's chosen. The Sudden Thunder is a long-barreled revolver fashioned from heavy steel alloyed with Starmetal. Orichalkum inlays wind their way all around the barrel and over the rosewood grip; the inner workings or the weapon are also made of the divine sun-metal. The rotating cylinder can hold six of the finger-sized rounds created by Heaven's gods of Alchemy and inscribed with prayers to Sol Invictus for the souls of the slain.<br> | | Ever since he took a pair of firewands from the pirate captain he mutineered against Cloud has taken on the aspect of the storm cloud, throwing thunder and lightning at his enemies. However it wasn't until the Bureau of Endings approached him that he gained access to a weapon fit to be wielded by one of Sol's chosen. The Sudden Thunder is a long-barreled revolver fashioned from heavy steel alloyed with Starmetal. Orichalkum inlays wind their way all around the barrel and over the rosewood grip; the inner workings or the weapon are also made of the divine sun-metal. The rotating cylinder can hold six of the finger-sized rounds created by Heaven's gods of Alchemy and inscribed with prayers to Sol Invictus for the souls of the slain.<br> |
| − | Armed with this deadly weapon Silver Cloud can truly bring down the thunder of heaven upon his enemies. And those struck by his lightning are blessed indeed, for their souls are not in danger of falling into the hands of the Dead or even the hungry maw of Oblivion. Instead they are called back into the weapon, where their relieved faces become part of its ornamentation until such time as they can be safely delivered to Heaven. <br> | + | Armed with this deadly weapon Silver Cloud can truly bring down the thunder of heaven upon his enemies. And those struck by his lightning are blessed indeed, for their souls are not in danger of falling into the hands of the Dead or even the hungry maw of Oblivion. Instead they are called back into the weapon, where their relieved faces become part of its ornamentation until such time as they can be safely delivered to Heaven. --INSERT SPECIAL ABILITY HERE --<br> |
| − | Recognizing the need for quick and decisive action once negotiations have broken down Sudden Thunder veritably flies into the hand of its master. Many a necro-sympathizer has fallen to Cloud's bullets because he thought he was faster on the draw. Whenever the first action of the fight is to draw or fire, the weapon's master gains four additional dice on the Join Battle roll.<br>
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| | The final power of the Sudden Thunder is to allow its Solar master to shape their Essence into ammunitions, should he ever run out. This allows the application of Phantom Arrow Technique to the alchemical rounds for this weapon by increasing its cost to 2m per shot. | | The final power of the Sudden Thunder is to allow its Solar master to shape their Essence into ammunitions, should he ever run out. This allows the application of Phantom Arrow Technique to the alchemical rounds for this weapon by increasing its cost to 2m per shot. |
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| − | When Cloud accepted Heaven's offer and left his pirate days behind, the most loyal of his crew followed. As his first mate put it: "It's easy for a soldier to go back home and become a guardsman or bodyguard. For those of us in the piracy business it's usually a little harder." Now instead of the heavily armed pirate cruiser 'Black Sky' Cloud commands the single-masted 'Stormdriven', a sleek and fast ship that even his small crew of five can handle.<br>
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| − | <b>Tya Fal Ituso</b> was the helmsman of the 'Black Sky'. Besides her(*) skills as navigator and tactician Cloud values her for her sarcastic wit and the way she speaks her mind with no regard to differences of rank.<br>
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| − | <b>Sadoci Ramocca</b>, the first mate. Behind his wild and dangerous exterior he hides a sophisticated mind and a love for music and art he rarely gets a chance to indulge in.<br>
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| − | <b>Jonil Zesmus</b>, the ship's doctor and cook. His soup is nearly inedible, but its medicinal properties can't be denied.<br>
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| − | <b>Olameru</b> and <b>Hejo</b>, two sailors. Virtually inseperable since they escaped from slavery together their mindset is somewhat mercenary. Cloud is the one with the money and through many trials has never led them wrong, ergo he is worthy of their undivided loyalty.
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| − | (*): Assume that wherever the English 'she' is used Silver Cloud uses the Riverspeak pronoun for 'being of indeterminate/neutral gender'.
| + | ===Followers 2=== |
| | + | Cloud's pirate crew still serves him. |
| | ===Salary 2=== | | ===Salary 2=== |
| − | Through clever negotiating Cloud has managed to get a quite favorable contract from his heavenly employers. Having someone who can easily transport an entire group of agents on his ship and can invoke the diplomatic immunity of the Eclipse Caste on their behalf is very useful after all ... Of course, the truth is also, that without the backing of heavenly Ambrosia Cloud could hardly maintain ship and crew (without resorting to less than legal activities, that is), much less the expensive alchemical ammunitions for his gun. Buying the 'Stormdriven' has put quite a dent in his finances as well. As a result the crafty Lawgiver is always on the lookout for opportunities to make a quick profit or put cunning schemes in action to milk the gullible. | + | Through clever negotiating Cloud has managed to get quite a price for his services. |
| | ===Backing 1 - The Department of Endings=== | | ===Backing 1 - The Department of Endings=== |
| − | Though the Elder Sidereals shudder at the thought of an Eclipse Caste bureaucrat beating them at their own game, Cloud has shown little interest in the politics of Yu-Shan so far. Consequently his standing in the Heavenly City and the support provided to him by the Bureau of Destiny is no greater than that accorded to any agent of the Department of Endings. The gods he interacts with show professional curtesy for the most part and hide behind regulations and procedure whenever his questions and requests become too demanding.
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| | ===Allies 1=== | | ===Allies 1=== |
| − | In Shin Yiu, God of Political Change from the Bottom Up, Cloud has found a friend and ally in Yu-Shan. This functionary from the Department of Endings was the one who approached the young Solar and brought him into the fold of the Elite Task Group for the Guidance and Re-Appropriation of Lost Souls. Since then the two of them have become friends, just as they were once before, though the god is loathe to speak about 'ancient history' as he calls it. The two of them certainly share certain philosophies and Shin Yiu takes great pleasure in giving the Lawgiver sarcastically commented tours through the byzantine complexities of Yu-Shan, ever hoping to awaken the politician in his friend. The resulting changes in the Heavenly City would likely be quite a coup for him, but so far Cloud has stayed firmly grounded in the affairs of Creation.
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| − | ===Contacts 3=== | + | Cloud has visited just about every Eastern port and knows where to find the smugglers, thieves and pirates he does business with. |
| − | During his extended travels and later his tenure as pirate captain Silver Cloud has visited almost every seaport in the East, from Cherak to Celeren and from Lookshy (''very'' carefully) to Greyfalls. And where he hasn't been himself he has heard stories. It's a matter of pride, that wherever he goes he always knows someone who knows a guy ... Smugglers, fences, crimelords, pirates - he never has trouble finding the right partner for a shady deal or a bit of information.
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| − | ===Manse 3===
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| − | The Department of Endings has issued Cloud a Freedom Stone for the duration of the Black Chase Benediction mission. The power of this hearthstone makes it impossible for him to be bound, shackled, clinched or in any other way constrained. Such attempts automatically fail with no effort required.
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| | ==History== | | ==History== |
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| | ==Merits and Flaws== | | ==Merits and Flaws== |
| − | ===Wanted 2 & Known Anathema 1===
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| − | Even though Cloud shifted his outward appearance since he got onto the Bureau's payroll, there are still a few who know his face well enough to recognize him and many more who have heard of the 'Black Sky' and its captain. He never made the mistake of becoming infamous enough to merit sending dedicated battle ship after him, but a number of mercenary groups would recognize him if he got in their way and a few ship-owners and merchants have placed bounties on his head.<br>
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| − | Thankfully not everyone puts together the stories of the Silver Cloud on a Black Sky and the rumours of the Shining Gunman, the Anathema who is said to travel the many rivers of the East. Depending on who is speaking, he is either a figure of demon aspect, killing indiscriminately and deceiving honest people with his silver tongue, or he is a hero of the people, fighting oppressive warlords (and their taxes) as well as hunting the restless dead.
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| | ==Goals and Motivations== | | ==Goals and Motivations== |
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| | ==XP== | | ==XP== |
| − | XP gained: 13<br> | + | XP gained: 0<br> |
| − | XP spent: 8 (Sagacious Reading of Intent)<br> | + | XP spent: 0<br> |
| − | XP unspent: 5 | + | XP unspent: 0 |
