Editing Singing For His Supper, Part II

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''Crap, my benefactor’s got her own reimaging of “Flowers in the Attic” going on. So much for the kids being lucky''.<br><br>
 
''Crap, my benefactor’s got her own reimaging of “Flowers in the Attic” going on. So much for the kids being lucky''.<br><br>
  
He began sending rather than receiving thoughts, engaging both of them directly,  <span style="color:#1c3271">''It’s OK. I know you’re scared, but really I ain’t so bad and you aren’t in as much danger as you think you are. Not right now anyway.  If you can understand me, nod''</span>.<br><br>
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He began sending rather than receiving thoughts, engaging both of them directly,  <span style="color:#31732E">''It’s OK. I know you’re scared, but really I ain’t so bad and you aren’t in as much danger as you think you are. Not right now anyway.  If you can understand me, nod''</span>.<br><br>
  
 
The girls clutched each other tightly, and the younger one began to cry, tears running down her cheeks.  Hesitantly, almost imperceptibly, they both nodded in unison.  "We'll be good, mister.  We're sorry we're so much expense and bother."<br><br>
 
The girls clutched each other tightly, and the younger one began to cry, tears running down her cheeks.  Hesitantly, almost imperceptibly, they both nodded in unison.  "We'll be good, mister.  We're sorry we're so much expense and bother."<br><br>

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