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'''WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO YOU?''' She has just received a telegram informing her that her husband and two eldest sons were lost in the sinking of their ship, the USS Cyclops, in the Bermuda Triangle. There is no mention of her youngest, Dieter, who also served aboard the Cyclops.
 
'''WHAT JUST HAPPENED TO YOU?''' She has just received a telegram informing her that her husband and two eldest sons were lost in the sinking of their ship, the USS Cyclops, in the Bermuda Triangle. There is no mention of her youngest, Dieter, who also served aboard the Cyclops.
  
'''WHAT'S ON THE SURFACE?''' A stocky woman of middle years, the pretty girl she used to be still just about visible beneath the lines and weathering brought about by raising three children and a life hard-lived. Her hair is dark, and streaked with grey. Her clothes and shoes are heavy, dull, practical; wind and waterproof.
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'''WHAT'S ON THE SURFACE?'''A stocky woman of middle years, the pretty girl she used to be still just about visible beneath the lines and weathering brought about by raising three children and a life hard-lived. Her hair is dark, and streaked with grey. Her clothes and shoes are heavy, dull, practical; wind and waterproof.
 
She’s stern and firm, with little patient for fools or nonsense.
 
She’s stern and firm, with little patient for fools or nonsense.
  

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