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Beneath the soft murmurs of the other patrons in Monkey’s Third Song, [[Cynis Lachid and Layochi|Cynis Lachid]] spoke.
 
Beneath the soft murmurs of the other patrons in Monkey’s Third Song, [[Cynis Lachid and Layochi|Cynis Lachid]] spoke.
  
“I do not know his name, but his home was in the land of the dead.  I do not know what message he carried, but the companions of his heart are marked by oblivion.”
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“I do not know his name, but his home was in the land of the dead.  I do not know what message he carried, but the companions of his heart marked by oblivion.”
  
 
It bothered [[Leaf Shakes the Wind]] more than he would ever let on to hear the young dragon blood speak in full sentences without his sister completing his statements for him.  As their Essences diverged into different paths, their individuality grew.  It made them stronger, and he had long wished for one to show some spark of personality that was not shared by the other.  Now that it was occurring, though, it felt as disquieting as their uniformity had when he first met them.  He sipped his tea.
 
It bothered [[Leaf Shakes the Wind]] more than he would ever let on to hear the young dragon blood speak in full sentences without his sister completing his statements for him.  As their Essences diverged into different paths, their individuality grew.  It made them stronger, and he had long wished for one to show some spark of personality that was not shared by the other.  Now that it was occurring, though, it felt as disquieting as their uniformity had when he first met them.  He sipped his tea.

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