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[[Storm of Amber]] frowned doubtfully.  "You think so?"
 
[[Storm of Amber]] frowned doubtfully.  "You think so?"
  
"Well, tell me why not."
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"Tell me why not."
  
 
"The brush work is a little..."  The Exalt made an empty gesture towards the scroll.  "sloppy, isn't it?"
 
"The brush work is a little..."  The Exalt made an empty gesture towards the scroll.  "sloppy, isn't it?"
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"I don't think so."  Sweet Brass shook her head.  "But they would keep a closer eye on you and [[An Oathsworn Circle|your circle]]."
 
"I don't think so."  Sweet Brass shook her head.  "But they would keep a closer eye on you and [[An Oathsworn Circle|your circle]]."
  
"My...  circle?"
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"My circle?"
  
 
"Of course.  You are the leaders.  Our work here would collapse without you."
 
"Of course.  You are the leaders.  Our work here would collapse without you."
  
"Our... work.  Yes."  Storm nodded.  "Our work."
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"Our... work.  Yes."  Storm nodded.  "Our work.
  
"What did you think I was talking about?"
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"What are their plans?"
 
 
"Nothing."  Storm smiled.  "What are their plans?"
 
  
 
Sweet Brass looked to the ground.  "I think they mean to hire me again; I will become their Assistant Eastern Goddess of War for [[The Marukan Alliance]] or some such, responsible for filing reports on what you do."
 
Sweet Brass looked to the ground.  "I think they mean to hire me again; I will become their Assistant Eastern Goddess of War for [[The Marukan Alliance]] or some such, responsible for filing reports on what you do."
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"Good."  The Exalt touched his fingers to her throat and frowned.  "Though a job means a leash around your neck."   
 
"Good."  The Exalt touched his fingers to her throat and frowned.  "Though a job means a leash around your neck."   
  
"A leash to which you hold the chain.  This job proves what I said when first we met; glory and honor in Heaven by service to your Mandate."  Sweet Brass wrapped her hand back through Storm's arm and the pair started walking again, losing themselves amidst the brightly colored stalls of the spring market.  "And I'll never give up your secrets.  Do you trust me in that?"
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"A leash to which you hold the chain.  This job proves what I said when first we met; glory and honor in Heaven by service to your Mandate."  Sweet Brass wrapped a hand through Storm's arm and the pair started walking again, losing themselves amidst the brightly colored stalls of the spring market.  "And I'll never give up your secrets.  Do you trust me in that?"
  
"I trust you in everything." Storm of Amber shook the rice-paper scroll under his arm and smiled.  "Except your taste in art."
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"I trust you in everything. "Storm of Amber shook the rice-paper scroll under his arm and smiled.  "Except your taste in art."
  
  
 
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[[Heaven's Mandate]]
 
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