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'''Appearance:''' Long black hair, dark eyes, tall. Hana is very pretty, but she's too scary for that to matter. Her eyes are cold, her manner is threatening, and she oozes an undefinable aura that makes people scared.
 
'''Appearance:''' Long black hair, dark eyes, tall. Hana is very pretty, but she's too scary for that to matter. Her eyes are cold, her manner is threatening, and she oozes an undefinable aura that makes people scared.
  
'''Point Cost:''' 400 + 12 XP Spent = 412
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'''Point Cost:''' 400
  
 
'''Body''' 6 (60)
 
'''Body''' 6 (60)
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'''Soul''' 8 (80)
 
'''Soul''' 8 (80)
  
'''ACV''' 6, 10 in Melee
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'''ACV''' 6, 9 in Melee
'''DCV''' 6, 10 in Melee
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'''DCV''' 6, 9 in Melee
 
'''HLTH''' 90
 
'''HLTH''' 90
 
'''NRG''' 65
 
'''NRG''' 65
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Armor 14
 
Armor 14
 
Force Field 32
 
Force Field 32
Punch: 15, non-penetrating
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Punch: 14, non-penetrating
Scarf: 20, non-penetrating, Flexible 1
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Scarf: 19, non-penetrating, Flexible 1
 
Gaze of Doom: 3 points of Soul, Spreading 3
 
Gaze of Doom: 3 points of Soul, Spreading 3
Iron Punch: 66
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Iron Punch: 58
Wall of Blades: Base 49
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Wall of Blades: Base 46
Ribbon of Blades: 73, ignores 16 armor, Flexible 3, Spreading 3, Reach, Selective, Autofire
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Ribbon of Blades: 65, ignores 16 armor, Flexible 3, Spreading 3, Reach, Selective, Autofire
  
 
'''ATTRIBUTES'''
 
'''ATTRIBUTES'''
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Alternate Form (Steel Warrior Hana) 10 (100)
 
Alternate Form (Steel Warrior Hana) 10 (100)
  
Combat Technique 7: Hardboiled 2, Judge Opponent, Concealment, Brutal, Lightning Reflexes, Precise Attack (14)
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Combat Technique 5: Hardboiled 2, Judge Opponent, Concealment, Brutal (10)
  
 
Divine Relationship 2 (4)
 
Divine Relationship 2 (4)
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Tough 4 (8)
 
Tough 4 (8)
  
Melee Attack 4 (12)
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Melee Attack 3 (9)
  
Melee Defense 4(12)
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Melee Defense 3(9)
  
 
Special Defense 2: Fear 2 (4)
 
Special Defense 2: Fear 2 (4)
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Item 2: Weighted Scarf (Weapon 2, Flexible 1, Non-Penetrating) (2)
 
Item 2: Weighted Scarf (Weapon 2, Flexible 1, Non-Penetrating) (2)
  
Gaze of Doom (Weapon 0, Range 1, Spreading 3, Drain Soul 3, Psychic 6, Undetectable 3, Requires Eye Contact -2) (14)
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Gaze of Doom (Weapon 0, Range 1, Spreading 3, Drain Soul 3, Psychic 6, Undetectable 1, Requires Eye Contact -2) (12)
  
 
Skill: Acrobatics 1 (Specialty: Tumbling) (3)
 
Skill: Acrobatics 1 (Specialty: Tumbling) (3)
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Massive Damage 2 (Melee) (14)
 
Massive Damage 2 (Melee) (14)
  
Ribbon of Blades: Weapon 9, Reach, Autofire 3, Flexible 3, Spreading 3, Selective, Penetrating 4, Hands -1, Shieldless -1, Deplete -1
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Ribbon of Blades: Weapon 9, Reach, Autofire 3, Flexible 3, Spreading 3, Selective, Penetrating 4, Hands -1, Shieldless -1
  
Iron Punch: Secondary Weapon 8
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Iron Punch: Secondary Weapon 7
  
 
Marked -3 (Cannot be disguised, armored magical girl)
 
Marked -3 (Cannot be disguised, armored magical girl)
  
 
'''Judy Nesmith'''
 
'''Judy Nesmith'''
 
[[Image:Judy_Nesmith.png]]
 
  
 
'''Age:''' 16
 
'''Age:''' 16
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'''Appearance:''' Blonde hair in a pageboy, green eyes, pretty. Very smart, but often underestimated.
 
'''Appearance:''' Blonde hair in a pageboy, green eyes, pretty. Very smart, but often underestimated.
  
'''Points:''' 180  
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'''Points:''' 180 170
  
 
'''Body:''' 4 (40)
 
'''Body:''' 4 (40)
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Item: Pepper Spray (1)
 
Item: Pepper Spray (1)
 
'''Hana's Gang Members'''
 
 
(For individual descriptions, see [[NPCs of note#Hana's Gang|NPCs]])
 
 
'''Points:''' 130
 
 
'''Body: 4''' (40)
 
'''Mind:''' 4 (40)
 
'''Soul:''' 4 (40)
 
 
'''Attributes'''
 
 
Street Sense 1 (2)
 
Urban Tracking 1 (1)
 
Stealth 1 (3)
 
Burglary 1 (2)
 
Intimidate 1 (2)
 
Item: Club (2)
 
 
'''Drawbacks'''
 
 
Ism:  Obviously a thug -2
 
  
 
'''Hana Jeong-- family and history'''
 
'''Hana Jeong-- family and history'''
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Hana's history can be summed up with a single word: "Troubled." She attended a very rough girl's school, and quickly
 
Hana's history can be summed up with a single word: "Troubled." She attended a very rough girl's school, and quickly
 
got into a lot of fights, as she wouldn't tolerate being pushed around by anyone, no matter who. Hana's size, ethnicity,
 
got into a lot of fights, as she wouldn't tolerate being pushed around by anyone, no matter who. Hana's size, ethnicity,
and attitude made her seem like a challenge to many girls (especially at [[Locations of note: For The Spirit Of Creation#Bales House School|Bales House School]]), but her ability to fight and the icy, cold gaze she gradually
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and attitude made her seem like a challenge to many girls, but her ability to fight and the icy, cold gaze she gradually
 
acquired made many of these confrontations short. She began to gain followers-- other tough girls who wanted to follow
 
acquired made many of these confrontations short. She began to gain followers-- other tough girls who wanted to follow
 
the toughest one of all. Hana wanted friends, but didn't know how to get them, except by being the tough, dangerous
 
the toughest one of all. Hana wanted friends, but didn't know how to get them, except by being the tough, dangerous

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