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Stepping forward, he walked softly towards the first set of double doors, waiting until someone opened them from within, and then quickly slipped inside.  He was expecting the guards waiting on the inside and channeled his essence once again so that their gazes drifted past him like water lilies in a soft current.  It still made him nervous to rely on magic to keep him safe, but in some situations, like this one, he had no other option.
 
Stepping forward, he walked softly towards the first set of double doors, waiting until someone opened them from within, and then quickly slipped inside.  He was expecting the guards waiting on the inside and channeled his essence once again so that their gazes drifted past him like water lilies in a soft current.  It still made him nervous to rely on magic to keep him safe, but in some situations, like this one, he had no other option.
  
A second set of doors waited for him at the end of the hall; opening them released a burst of hot, wet air that instantly sent perspiration running down his face.  Peering through the ornamental screens, Subaru saw a single person bathing in the hot pool, just as he had expected.  His features relaxed and his disguise fell away.  ''So innocent'', he thought.  ''So pure for a builder of nations.  I must make sure that the corrupting influences of this world do not turn such a noble heart.''
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A second set of doors waited for him at the end of the hall; opening them released a burst of hot, wet air that instantly sent perspiration running down his face.  Peering through the ornamental screens, Subaru saw a single person bathing in the hot pool, just as he had expected.  His features relaxed and his disguise fell away.  ''So innocent'', he thought.  ''So pure for a builder of nations.  I must make sure that the corrupting influences of this world to not turn such a noble heart.''
  
 
Scaling the ornate wooden walls of the bathhouse was easy; his fingers closed easily around carved heads of birds and through the holes in delicate scrollwork.  Once safely in the rafters, he crept forward towards a better observation point, moving slowly along the steam-slicked beams as he sought to pierce the clouds below with his vision.
 
Scaling the ornate wooden walls of the bathhouse was easy; his fingers closed easily around carved heads of birds and through the holes in delicate scrollwork.  Once safely in the rafters, he crept forward towards a better observation point, moving slowly along the steam-slicked beams as he sought to pierce the clouds below with his vision.

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